Home› Poetry, Prose, Music & Art

my morning thought....

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The warm October
hazel of your eyes savored
the early autumn
blush of my lips
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
Post edited by Unknown User on

Comments

  • brain of cbrain of c Posts: 5,213
    huh.

    october in fargo must be warmer than october in the poconos.


    who'd a thunk?
    d'oh!!!!!!

    http://www.myspace.com/brain_of_c
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    a poet wrote:
    The warm October
    hazel of your eyes savored
    the early autumn
    blush of my lips


    That's very pretty.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    brain of c wrote:
    huh.

    october in fargo must be warmer than october in the poconos.


    who'd a thunk?
    Did you say Poconos?!!!!!I LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEE THe POcs!!!!!
    Wannna go there wit me?;)

    The best is i hear at Shawnee they have these champagne glasses used as bubblebaths.
    Not to mention they have ski slopes....;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    a poet wrote:
    The warm October
    hazel of your eyes savored
    the early autumn
    blush of my lips
    oh...um...poet...instead of me flirting and yapping...I should say....
    I like your poem A L O T.
    You are like so talented....


    allison:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • hsewifhsewif Posts: 444
    a poet wrote:
    The warm October
    hazel of your eyes savored
    the early autumn
    blush of my lips

    Sexy (+ a bunch to make it 10)
  • burtschipsburtschips Posts: 734
    a poet wrote:
    The warm October
    hazel of your eyes savored
    the early autumn
    blush of my lips

    It's rhythmic and smooth. I'm soothed. I need to recline into fluidity.
    Salut baloo
Sign In or Register to comment.