November Nights

Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
We walk down the street.
The people we meet.
The quiet leaves,
that dance at our feet.

We walk down the street.
My dreams of a warm breeze.
Your smiles that bring,
sweet release.

We walk down the street.
The people we meet.
This November night,
It seemed so right....
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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Comments

  • This is a nice little piece - subdued longing

    though I hate to do it - it reminds me of a little piece so I'm gonna post it

    Autumn leaves of pale maroon
    blessed by the amber thoughts of noon,
    hibernating in december’s dark
    before glowing at the mountain’s hearth,
    while shivering in the doorway of dusk
    the handle turns and the icey crust
    has thawed beneath the canopies,
    outlawed by some calamity
    from which wild deer are left fleeing
    from their quiet rippling pools.

    Crunching steps through unmarked trails
    over the bed of dying shells, hallmarked
    browns of the soil’s shroud, left by the shadow
    of September days, broken twigs from
    sick old men, warding saplings in their den
    waiting for the children to eat at the adult table
    softly storing untold fables like trophies on the
    mantelpiece
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I liked this one, it was uplifting and "light"...good read.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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