After a Dream

Righteous Jammer

Lets discover our past lives
The sun will awake us
Drops of rain will keep us clean
Love will keep us alive
The waves will bring us back

Lets get high
Meet me in the morning
I hear your name in the wind

Jedi Master Mike

short and sweet and somehow brought a smile to my face while sitting at work. Good stuff.

Righteous Jammer

Thanks Mike~ My vision in my head was more intense then that I could put on paper~

Jedi Master Mike

Sometimes the most intense feelings and visions just get bogged down when we try to over explain them in order to convey something. (This has always hindered my writing at least) Short and sweet, to me, is a bit more intense yet still open for various interperetations. Of course, this is just coming from a jackass sitting at work pretending he knows more that he probably does.

Jedi Master Mike

....than he probably does. See what I mean...non proof reading jackass.

DopeBeastie

i like the simplicity in the second stanza
and the lack of metaphor
makes the writing profound, in a way


I fell in love with someone who I am sure I loved in a past life. lol... he's such a jerk in this life, there really isn't any other explanation