about a girl....

yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
there she is
off in the distance
in all her essence
of which I long to be in her presence….

the gravity I want to break down..
of which keeps pushing me from her
her energy
orbiting
radiating
giving my world life…..
she is the sun
breaking the dark with her light

when I get ready to say hello
the owls hoot
mark the setting of her energy
giving me the dead moon instead
stumbling in the shadows once again
as they watch this blind fool wishfully trying to make its way back to her once again

dawn..oh i see it approaching
yesterday was forever
today is the start of something
tomorrow i will be in the eternity of her presence
explaining more is impossible
of her grace
of which is making me speechless
but of which gives me life when I see a glimpse of her graceful shine
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Comments

  • She sounds beautiful! :) Very nice!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • wow Rey! Awesome!
    i just got in from a long ass trip to Toronto and back...thanks for your PM :D
    after i get some rest, i will write you back, babe.
    that is one beautiful poem.
    she does indeed sound very beautiful.....and you write really well, i might add. :)
    love ya.
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