making a circle

yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
presence in the corridor
waiting to take me home
reaching out to reach in
a violation
a lapse in distance
seeking fodder for an other's existence

doors and windows
once open
now trap and strangle
the here and now
rewinding the emotions
to the days i once renounced
hanging to the string
leading to the noose
bringing me full circle
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Comments

  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    loved the second part of this poem

    I get mixed emotions from the poem
    not too sure what to make of it
    but sometimes that is good,
    works in this case
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
    thanks....it's open to interpretation
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