my train in vain

yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i'm always here
crumbling beneath this stoic veneer

an impending collapse is what i await
from speculation and a heavy, vacant heart

loading my mind with hope
all the more to trigger a watershed of urgency

i've climbed mountains
only to descend back to my troubles

writing in ellipsis
waiting for you

i came alive with your voice
i know i will perish in your silence
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  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    one of the best ever in my book
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    if your waiting for something and your unhappy than your priorities are a lil nappy my friend

    great poem but no one can bring you down ever

    love and peace

    faith hope and love

    let us all be free
    amen
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    i'm always here
    crumbling beneath this stoic veneer

    an impending collapse is what i await
    from speculation and a heavy, vacant heart

    loading my mind with hope
    all the more to trigger a watershed of urgency

    i've climbed mountains
    only to descend back to my troubles

    writing in ellipsis
    waiting for you

    i came alive with your voice
    i know i will perish in your silence


    yerrey, this made me think, and feel things.......which is always good (unless it's bad), but it was good in this case, it's so urgent isn't it, when you're in love?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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