even hell floods; but its no relief
yerrey
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the lighthouse motions for attention
the waves seem to catch the call
the high tide of expectation
riding in each night
only to break at dawn
taking a piece of its world w/ it
oh how it reminds me of u
i didn't want the mist to become rain
your goodbye became the watershed
for the great flood
of which i was the only one
noah seemed to forget
the waves seem to catch the call
the high tide of expectation
riding in each night
only to break at dawn
taking a piece of its world w/ it
oh how it reminds me of u
i didn't want the mist to become rain
your goodbye became the watershed
for the great flood
of which i was the only one
noah seemed to forget
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I guess I only have one suggestion and that is to not use the e-abbreviations...
it weakens the piece in my opinion. you, with, i don't know.
otherwise a soft and telling sadness.