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insomnia theatre

yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i'm always anticipating instead living
always on the edge of my seat
never breathing a sigh of relief
a makeshift habitat
neighbor of the sleepy coast
stockpiled with barely edible sustaination
i'm worried as others are living
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    ...neighbor of the sleepy coast
    stockpiled with barely edible sustaination...


    :) like that a lot, yerrey :)



    sustaination

    sus
    stain
    nation


    it's great

    thanks :)
  • yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
    thanks!
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    kool!!!
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    you could work on it a little....eg sustenance is something that sustains you.....meagre portions.....poor remains.....and shoddy remnants......don't
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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