late night ramblings about her

yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i once jumped for a rock
in the middle of a stream
leading to a waterfall going no where
of which i fell into

i was so worried
i forgot how to think
how i remembered my name i don't know
i was so discouraged
i opened my eyes
expecting a surprise

i wondered how i got this far
without doing myself harm
finally being someone's concerned
aside from mine

i now jump for the rock
and if i miss
that's just fine
i'll let the stream decide of where i will go
for i have other things on my mind
like how much i love you
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  • I like this simply because I like the story of your journey. I must admit that the ending comes as a bit of a surprise but it ties nicely with the title. I'm curious, and this may be a little too personal to answer, but is she the one that made you jump for the rock? Do you see her when you think or visualize this journey? If so, tell us where and how--I'm interested.
  • yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
    well....lol.....thanks;)

    i just typed some words down and went with them...

    before i had met this girl....i had just been burned realy badly by another girl..,.,.....and it perpetuated my feeling that love is not for me...becoming pretty pessimistic

    but i got back in contact with an old high school classmate....and we've talking since the start of summer...and it's not far fetch to say that i'm falling in love with her

    so i guess the journey is about my recent experience

    t
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