five days and counting

yerrey
yerrey Posts: 183
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
your silence hints at a change
pesimissim isn't just another passing mood
if it's hanging above my head for the fifth day straight

i left the world hanging
so that i can balance myself with your hello
i can't stand anymore silence
my heart has gone thru enough breaking

the past leaves slower than tomorrow's arrival
the sky is grey and it's not b/c of the coming rain
there's someone out there for everyone
oh how i wish i could believe that
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  • A HitchHiker Poet
    A HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    Sometimes silence can be golden....Not the silent treatment though... I love this poem
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • yerrey
    yerrey Posts: 183
    thanks!
  • carpenter_newton
    carpenter_newton Posts: 71
    Originally posted by A HitchHiker Poet
    Sometimes silence can be golden....Not the silent treatment though... I love this poem

    ditto.


    "the past leaves slower than tomorrow's arrival"

    i like that line a lot. :)
    i suggest you step out on your porch
    run away my son...see it all...oh see the world

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