blowing up the moon and sun

yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
down here
where i fell for her
her footsteps and tears that i feel
forgetting to lift me up
she goes with fleeting time
trails of tears
mocking me in the moonlight

wide-eyed and pale
face to face with the sun
screaming and mourning
for some shade
from all that highlights
each destinction
from my dream with her
and life without her
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  • Anna_falkAnna_falk Posts: 114
    A good, sad, yet romantic poem I think, thank you :)
    To worry about tomorrow doesn't make it easier,
    it only makes today worse.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    beautiful!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    yerrey wrote:

    wide-eyed and pale
    face to face with the sun
    screaming and mourning
    for some shade
    from all that highlights
    each destinction
    from my dream with her
    and life without her

    I especially like this part
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • yerreyyerrey Posts: 183
    thanks ....
  • burtschipsburtschips Posts: 734
    The best title. great poem too.
    Salut baloo
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