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Love is Suicide......a pumpkins refrence but its what i'm feeling now.

yield670yield670 Posts: 19
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ok so i guess i'm gonna pull something out of my ass and call this Lonley.

Lonley

My days are numbered
I would be so grateful if I could spend
The rest of my days with you
Every waking moment
The one I love
The one I care for
The one thats so special to me
The one i need to carry me
Through the days
I love you so much
It makes me cry
If you'll let me be the
One that holds you
I'll never let you down
And make you cry
Never make you
Upset
I'll always be there
I always am
I'll never put your feet back on the ground
I'll be there
When you needa shoulder to cry
On and rest
Someone to talk to
Someone to be there
I'll be there
I would give anything for
Just one kiss
From your lips
To stare into your eyes
And know that you love me
Would be my everything
This hurts so much
I don't know if I should
Stop trying or what
I haven't a clue
I know that you're my stars
And my whole
Let me be the one
Your one
Your earth
Let me love you
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  • yield670yield670 Posts: 19
    i wrote that about my best friend bethany.havent given it to her.she loves someone thats cheated on her the frist time they went out....fuck.i'm waiting i guess.

    my names matt(TERRY to you SETA) and i'm 15.

    really want to know what you all think.

    Sarcastic comments : expected but mainly from setaside that bitch.
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    well I was going to be nice

    but NOOOOOOOO He had to go be an ass

    15 does not equivocate to invincible, my friend.

    but

    all things aside, it is good to see you able to get this out. she may someday learn better.

    I don't know, but you are a good guy. She doesn't deserve you.

    keep the search alive and keep yourself alive.

    I'll always be around.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Sweetheart, you're 15! I remember when I was totally in love with this guy! Oh how I thought I loved him! We'd mess around sometimes, nothing too serious and then he started dating my friend. NICE!

    So, bye-bye for me.

    Then one day he finds out that I totally was "in love" with him & he's like : "I got a nice purple condom here, wanna use it?"

    I did not want to use it! I did not use it! He was a jerk!


    Don't waste your teen years fawning over lost love! It's a BIG waste of time! Learn, move on. You will find love again.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    this was so well said that it took me right back to that same time in my life when i was waiting for someone who looked right past me to focus on someone else.

    having the luxury to look back at it, i can tell you its a blessing in itself to be able to have those feelings for someone else whether or not she feels exactly the same way. i also know she's a lucky girl even if she doesn't realize it yet. your heart knows what the deal is and whether she will appreciate the words you've written for her - so listen to it whatever the answer is.

    only promise yourself that if for some reason it isn't the answer you might be hoping for, that you don't spend too long waiting on this one girl. be open to find love where it really exists because it would be such a shame if you missed out on the girl that was meant for you - whoever she might be.
  • yield670yield670 Posts: 19
    thanks everyone.i'm glad that you all like it.thanks for the advice.
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Don't waste your teen years fawning over lost love! It's a BIG waste of time!

    wasting time fawning over lost love is what teh "teen years" are all about....
    waste away and soon you'll see what a waste it was and you'll be 24 and in love with yourself and someone you loves you back
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Goulet
    wasting time fawning over lost love is what teh "teen years" are all about....
    waste away and soon you'll see what a waste it was and you'll be 24 and in love with yourself and someone you loves you back

    now thats the kind of talk i like to hear. :)
  • yield670yield670 Posts: 19
    thanks everyone
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    MattTerryYieldWHATEVERTHEHELL

    listen to the women up there, they know of what they speak.

    ALSO

    If you ever need lessons in pleasure, B.E. is someone who teaches well and cheerfully.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Lithium274Lithium274 Posts: 1
    hi im new here...my first post actually....but you know what matt your poem....it made me cry....honestly it did and im not 15 im 23......i just had to tell you that i dont know if its cuz im very emotional right ow or what but it was very good.....keep writing....rawck on!:)
    If you love someone set them free....If somebody loves you don't fuck up....
  • california girlcalifornia girl Posts: 70
    recognize these words and this feeling.

    i seem to recognize YOU>

    i hope i see you around. how is travis?

    you goofy boys............

    every time i read something of yours, i feel it to my depths. i feel the same way. just thought you'd like to know.

    ~ melody
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