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Remove You From Me

PyramidPyramid Posts: 61
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hey all,

Heres a poem of mine. Hope you enjoy it! :)



Remove You From Me

I need to remove the you from me
You float out of my mouth
You visit in dreams
I see you at work
I see you in the street
I try to untie you for a little relief

I need to remove the you from me
I can feel your touch
Still see you sleep
I remember every word
I said to you
You, the only person I’ve never lied to

Time tears holes
It rips through skin
And warm blood flows
Through everything
You touch and see
It comes to life
I feel blood flowing
Out of mine...
"...follow the strangest tribe..." - pj

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    i forgeti forget Posts: 281
    That's pretty good. Lots of emotion there.
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    the eternal
    morning after
    the smokey joint
    clings to us
    like dog breath
    sticks to man's best friend
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
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    keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    i need to chop my hands off
    someone save them before
    the side of the road deer
    becomes a picture of my hands

    i see them lying there
    i believe they are the light
    sorrounded by blood
    run over left for nothing

    into them i want to fly
    for the good of life
    for the love of the highest
    convicted
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