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Take Towards Clouds

PyramidPyramid Posts: 61
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It's you flying over lime green hills
Out over azure oceans
You dessert chocolate cream.

I'd like to keep you in my breast pocket
You can sleep on my heartbeat.
I can know you're safe in there.

When we wake on cold mornings
We will roll around like puppies
Before you take towards clouds.
I'll follow you around
With my arms outstretched.

We wait for the rain.
Nothing keeps us closer
Than outside closing in.
Something to look forward to
After stretching in the sun.

In my automobile we go driving
You laugh in the wind
And I feel like I'm flying...
"...follow the strangest tribe..." - pj

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  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    I'd like to keep you in my breast pocket
    You can sleep on my heartbeat.
    I can know you're safe in there.

    I love these lines....thanks for sharing
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    coachchris wrote:
    I'd like to keep you in my breast pocket
    You can sleep on my heartbeat.
    I can know you're safe in there.

    I love these lines....thanks for sharing

    My favorite line in the poem as well
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    EvilToasterElf wrote:
    My favorite line in the poem as well

    My favorite lines as well. Very original and brought a smile. I really like this poem. Thanks for posting!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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