Words (unspoken)

Buru

Sewage water
Feeding my troubled mind
Like green ivy
crawling...
Twisting itself
Into
Contorted expressions
Of delusional sentiment
Thawing the words
All left to rot
In abandoned depths,
Recoiling from the whiplash
That is life
Hiding in dark corners
Waiting...
For an utterance
To relieve them from hell
From desperate oblivion
Where they wither away
Just like yellow pages
Where they just become shreds
To be trod upon
Forgotten...
And I killed them
The unsuspecting murderer...
Forgive me,
For death was
Never a wish
And silence was
Just an escape.


Buru

anOmis

i really love 'fast" poems
by fast i mean poems w/short words

loved this one..
true , rought but beautiful as well

Being Enlightened

I love how you likend the unspoken words to sewage water!!! Some words unspoken, leave you feeling sick with regret.

I really liked this one!

Buru

Originally posted by anOmis
i really love 'fast" poems
by fast i mean poems w/short words

loved this one..
true , rought but beautiful as well

Thanks
I like the fast pace in this one too.

Buru

Originally posted by Being Enlightened
I love how you liked the unspoken words to sewage water!!! Some words unspoken, leave you feeling sick with regret.

I really liked this one!

Thanks
I imagined words flowing through my rotten mind, being trapped inside (underground), therefore sewage water, and they also must some day surface…

tenaciousA

let us not forget: some words when spoken, can't be taken back...




nice works buru