Love Liza

suede

do you ever cry
yourself asleep at night?
i do it everyday...

i miss you
i wish you
you had stayed
for one more day.
i cry
inside
it is where
you talk to me.
i hold you
i told you
in my Heart
you lit a spark.

do you remember why
you said goodbye?
i wonder everyday...

your scent
your skin
grin and bare it
on my chin.
my Heart
torn apart
everyday
since that day.
you talk to me
quietly
in my Heart
from there always...
i miss you
i wish you
you had stayed
for one more day.
i cry
inside
it is where
you talk to me.
i hold you
i told you
in my Heart
you lit a spark...

do you ever cry
yourself asleep at night?
i do it everyday...

i know i'll never kiss you
but i really do miss you.

you've really made a mess...

-kNb >11.28.03<

inspired by the movie "Love Liza"
you will cry

justam

Your line "you've really made a mess" made me think about the fact that in love, people seldom clean up after themselves.

And it is a shame that they don't.

suede

I think in the movie Phillip Seymour Hoffman actually has a line where he says something like "you've really made a mess." His life had become so disorganized, and this one person changed his life as he knew it. I think at the end he knows he's really far gone and it really is the saddest thing.

Most times when a relationship ends, one party leaves the other with so many unanswered questions. They just get up and leave without thinking of anyone but themselves.

I'm not too sure how you meant your comment. As for the movie, his life, her actions, and everything else is just one big mess that seems to spiral out of control.

Thanks for the comment

justam

Originally posted by suede


Most times when a relationship ends, one party leaves the other with so many unanswered questions. They just get up and leave without thinking of anyone but themselves.

I'm not too sure how you meant your comment.

Well, that's pretty much what I was thinking about.

How sometimes when people break up one person goes off and leaves a huge mess behind and they don't seem to worry about it. It's like they're expecting someone else to sweep up the debris.