Shine On

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I am the crazy diamond
A jewel in the rough
When I dance
The sun catches me
And I sparkle
Full of the life I've lived
Full of love to give
Want to touch everyone
Make your hearts smile
Fill you up with my light
A rainbow of colours
Swirling and twirling
Melding and blending
We become one

Shine On
Shine On
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • And we all shine on
    like the moon
    and the stars
    and the sun

    "want to touch everyone"

    Careful. There are laws.

    I give this piece 24 karats out of......say, 6400 karats. hehehehe

    Damn you for being so freakin' cheerful.

    Damn!
    Damn!
    Damn!

    Cheerfullness is contagious, you know, like herpes.
  • Yes, I believe I shall be damned!

    Damn me, Damn me all to hell!

    I'll have a smoke and a tea with the devil

    maybe make her crack a smile

    maybe she'll send me back 'cause I'm just too

    damn cheerful to burn

    make me burn in other ways

    Hot burning fire, hot burning fire

    Burning with desire, burning with such desire!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ya know it's something my first
    feeling was that your poem was perfect
    and then when i went to type those
    words something weird happened to
    me and i thought what if your
    manipulating innocence



    this has a lesson i think
    i think it says we are suppossed to live
    without the second thought cause it doesn't matter
    who makes something beautiful but if it's loving
    or not

    yes i'm crazy

    love x infinity
    convicted
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