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Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
STANDING AT THE EDGE




















I HEAR A VOICE




















IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU





















I THINK I HEAR WHAT YOU'RE SAYING






















YOU SAID JUMP






















SO I DID
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Suicide on your mind?
    You've changed your place in this world!
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    Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by even flow?
    Suicide on your mind?


    Yup! I just got to the office! The 1st thing that enters my mind is JUMP! Exept - they must be wise to me - the windows don't open!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    i saw you standing at the edge
    i never seen you
    never heard you voice
    but i could see your eyes purple rain
    i could see your tears 441 thru 518
    so i flew this bird into you
    it made you question the future
    it made you question the seconds
    and i became you

    you never hurt again
    convicted
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    Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by keven 33
    i saw you standing at the edge
    i never seen you
    never heard you voice
    but i could see your eyes purple rain
    i could see your tears 441 thru 518
    so i flew this bird into you
    it made you question the future
    it made you question the seconds
    and i became you

    you never hurt again


    So sweet! Fly free, fly free!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by keven 33
    i saw you standing at the edge
    i never seen you
    never heard you voice
    but i could see your eyes purple rain
    i could see your tears 441 thru 518
    so i flew this bird into you
    it made you question the future
    it made you question the seconds
    and i became you

    you never hurt again

    You get the prize for beautiful visuals today....
    I REALLY enjoyed that, thanks.
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    Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by keven 33
    i saw you standing at the edge
    i never seen you
    never heard you voice
    but i could see your eyes purple rain
    i could see your tears 441 thru 518
    so i flew this bird into you
    it made you question the future
    it made you question the seconds
    and i became you

    you never hurt again

    This is beautiful! Thanks again!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    thanks but my sister wrote that one, its funny everytime i get a good word about my poem my sister wrote it

    i will tell her

    god bless you
    convicted
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