Nothing But You

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Empty spaces
Fill the places
Where you once stood

Inside this heart
And filling the
Mind, body, soul

There is a void
So black
It's blinding

Feel around
And seek
Find nothing

Hurl myself into it
Seeing nothing
Feeling nothing

Nothing, but you









It's kinda dark I suppose, but WTF! :D

Break time's over, back to the grind!
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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Comments

  • I know this feeling you talk of... so empty, but so full of that one person. Ugh... emotional paradox... quite disorienting, if I remember correctly.

    I really dig the flow of the 3rd and 4th stanzas, btw.
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