Big Love In Little Places

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The door opens
My gloomy shadow in the doorway
As I step inside my heart lightens
For your beautiful, innocent smile greets me
All the troubles of the day seem trivial
You run to me, all full of sweet love
I see it in your eyes, eminating from you
Your little arms wrap around my neck
I pick you up so your legs can encircle me
We shower eachother with loving kisses
And I feel that there's no place I'd rather be
I could just live in this moment forever!
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    so tender precious, Being

    i can feel the love....

    those lil arms encircling....

    that happy beam of pure adoration !


    wonderful,

    how you captured this moment---thanks

    LOVE

    is sooooooooooo beautiful

    in all its forms

    and the innocence of love radiating from children,
    pure gold--

    is something we can all aspire to

    LOVELOVE

    {{{{{{{{throwing her daisy arms about yr neck}}}}}}}}
  • :) It's about my nephew, he's amazing!

    {{{{{{KISSES}}}}}}
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    the poem
    was
    about a human boy....

    after i posted....


    i realized it didn't say child....

    just legs encircling.....


    i thought, whoa, i made some assumptions...there


    got really cute image

    of baby orangutan

    hopping up into yr arms

    with dewy brown eyes all aglaze............

    (giggles)


    hey cool i see Orange in orangutan

    orang/ malayasian i think, means 'man of the woods'

    :)
  • Originally posted by cassia
    the poem
    was
    about a human boy....

    after i posted....


    i realized it didn't say child....

    just legs encircling.....


    i thought, whoa, i made some assumptions...there


    got really cute image

    of baby orangutan

    hopping up into yr arms

    with dewy brown eyes all aglaze............

    (giggles)


    hey cool i see Orange in orangutan

    orang/ malayasian i think, means 'man of the woods'

    :)

    I think I'm the only Orange orangutan in the family. :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    I think I'm the only Orange orangutan in the family. :D

    :eek:
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    :)



    ooh, hey BE

    you are sooooooooooooo

    BEautiful


    beautyFull~~~~~~

    and BEaming


    hahaha

    be.....to be....i am


    in i-am big pentameter..................
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    just wanted to point out
    how
    much

    i love the alliterative feel

    of yr use of troubles/trivial

    and how good a sound bump with neck/pick~~


    good ear, BE
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    .
  • Originally posted by cassia
    .

    :D

    .
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    can't resist


    Above


    the smiley

    and

    a red period...

    then

    quote

    'all poets bleed'


    ohgodimsobad
    hahahahah

    girl logic...
    then
    all
    poets must
    be chicks

    right :)


    i mean they do say that creativity is on the Feminine side of the
    brain...........

    leakage

    stop me ok but oh well it's gorey fory friday 1333333 eek/love
    byenow
  • I'm a gore whore! The more the better! :D

    Bye sugarmagnolia! ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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