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Toward...

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm riding the wave
That's me out there
The one with the wet cheeks
On the peaks
Stretching my arms out
Closing my eyes and breathing
Within I'm heaving
Feeling the majestic force
Pulling me under and pushing me forward
Toward...
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    I always though the word 'toward' was weird
    especially when it's capitalized like 'Toward'
    it just looks wrong
    it looks like it should be going toward
    something that is warding off two words
    if you know what I'm saying
    or somehting like that
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Goulet
    I always though the word 'toward' was weird
    especially when it's capitalized like 'Toward'
    it just looks wrong
    it looks like it should be going toward
    something that is warding off two words
    if you know what I'm saying
    or somehting like that

    to ward

    or

    To ward

    :)

    it looks wrong and mostly i am wrong, so yes, i know what you are saying or something like that SPANK - for old times sake! How you been keeping? Hope you're doing well!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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