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Some Days

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When tears find my eyes,
Pour out over freckled cheeks,
Tracing fine lines,
Leaving mascara trails,
You don't mind that they stain you,
You hear my stories,
You share my dreams,
You soak in my regrets,
You allow me to lay upon you
And hold you so close
And never a complaint
About who I am.

My lovely pillow,
Some days, my only friend.
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • sultryeveningsultryevening Posts: 522
    wow! that was beautiful written,
    just....
    " lovely pillow"-! brought a smile
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
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  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    I would slightly disagree with sultry here... just b/c I think saying "my lovely pillow" is too much hand holding... I think it could be less blatant.

    :)

    I love you, BE!
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  • sultryeveningsultryevening Posts: 522
    i liked the innocence of it.
    and thought it was a really affectionate term .

    comfortable.
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
    Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
    E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Thanks guys!

    Glad I made you smile sultry!!!!!!!!!! :D

    I like to hold hands, Cran, you know I'm a blatant brat!!!! :D

    And I love you too, my friend! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • rapscallionyouthrapscallionyouth Posts: 28
    thats nice
    it would be nice to be your pillow

    my pillow only gets to soak up my massive drool
    and listen to me snore all night
    I make the shapes come much too close
    I pull my eyes out
    Hold my breath
    And wait until I shake...
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    I have Ballpillow. She is glorious and lovely.

    I love her so much. She stays close to me at night.

    My g/f thinks she's gross.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by rapscallionyouth
    thats nice
    it would be nice to be your pillow

    my pillow only gets to soak up my massive drool
    and listen to me snore all night

    :) Why thank you!

    Massive drool and snoring and it hasn't hit the road yet??? Your pillow sounds like a good friend too!!! :D:D:D;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Ok2GoOk2Go Posts: 102
    was the only way to the town of -
    Touching U
    "and then, one Thursday, nearly two thousand years after one man had been nailed to a tree for saying how great it would be to be nice to people for a change, a girl sitting on her own in a small cafe in Rickmansworth suddenly realized what it was that had been going wrong in the world all this time, and she finally knew how the world could be made a good and happy place. This time it was right and no one had to get nailed to anything. Sadly, before she could get to a phone to tell anyone about it, a terrible stupid catastrophe occurred, and the idea was lost forever."

    Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Ok2Go
    was the only way to the town of -
    Touching U

    :) Thank you! Usually the town has a population of 1 but we are growing and welcome the occasional tourist when they decide to stop on by. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    omg, what a cute little thing!


    i'm like a fish
    and this is like a plastic worm
    i'm thinking
    "oh that lucky girl"
    i'm thinking
    "oh i wish i had a wormy just like that one she has"
    and then i bite
    and find

    oh...


    hmmm...


    not food...
    still hungry...



    :D
    ~all is full of love~
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by tenaciousA
    omg, what a cute little thing!


    i'm like a fish
    and this is like a plastic worm
    i'm thinking
    "oh that lucky girl"
    i'm thinking
    "oh i wish i had a wormy just like that one she has"
    and then i bite
    and find

    oh...


    hmmm...


    not food...
    still hungry...



    :D

    tenA!!!!!!! :D And what a cute little fishy you are! I don't want to put you back! But I know that I cannot keep you for that would be your demise. :( So, I set you free, hoping that someday you will return to me. :)

    Thanks, love!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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