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Just a glimpse...

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
of your hair...



















as you turn...




















and shut the door...




















on forevermore...




















now a moment...




















frozen in time...



















set to replay...




















lost another day...




















Just a glimpse of your hair as you turn and shut the door on forevermore. Now a moment frozen in time. Set to replay. Lost another day.




















JUST A GLIMPSE
OF YOUR HAIR
AS YOU TURN
AND SHUT THE DOOR
ON FOREVERMORE
NOW A MOMENT
FROZEN IN TIME
SET TO REPLAY
LOST ANOTHER DAY



















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...
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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Comments

  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    a :) and a (((((HUG)))))) just for you.
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    I've never read such a short poem that was turned suddenly into such a LONG poem...*smiling* tis cool...I liked it
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • i forgeti forget Posts: 281
    That felt like a roller coaster ride!
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