Touched

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
Muted lemon-tangerine
Reflects the light
In your soul,
Deep inside,
Blood to hide,
Open wide!
Burst aqua-marine
Streams flowing
To my heart,
Deep inside,
Yours in mine,
Open wide!
Bind bordeaux-rose
Hands entwined
This our lives,
Deep inside,
Tenderly tied,
Open wide!
Open wide!


We stepped outside ourselves, collided, now our worlds spin in unison. It's a matter of fact and the fact of the matter remains, I feel the same and have no shame!










Have a great day, y'all! :)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • Lovely, B.E.! :D
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Thats an amazing piece B.E. You could almost turn it into a rap. "Tenderly tied"....thats a wicked line.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    That was awesome B.E.! Thank you for those beautiful lines!
    Me loves ya girlfriend!




    p.s. humina hamina himana!
    lol
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Ah, Funsbury! Merci, mon ami! Huggles! :D

    {{{nailz}}}, me boy, yo-yo-yo baby pop! And I'd like you to be the background dude going--pthh-pe-che as I bust my rhymes, homey! :p Thanks for reading and rapping and enjoying!

    Me lady of Maine! You know my love goes to you too, sweet thang! "You know a wish sandwich is that kind of a sandwhich wherein you have two slices of bread...and you WISH you had some meat--bow-bow-bow". :p;) *kisses*
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    You one kooky Canuck.....Wait......So am I
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • Originally posted by nailz100
    You one kooky Canuck.....Wait......So am I

    Hey my brother from another mother, we be cwazy Canucks! :D

    Well, I'm off. You take good care and post a poem or song or something, dammit! :)

    G'night!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    I looooooooooooooved this!!!! I wanted to SINGGGG it. :D Loverly. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i am proud to say that i was born in canada!!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • J to the essie! ;) Danka darlin'! I bet you have a beautiful voice and I'd be honoured if you sang my widdle poemsong! :D YAY!

    And olderman (youngatheartman)! Always good to hear from a fellow hoser, eh? :p:D I have to say, I really enjoyed this piece I pasted below from your "challenge" thread! Magnificent!


    "i walked upon the eastern shore with sand
    hot between my toes as the salt filled air
    filled my senses, consumed me with her hand
    her touch was soft like dream whipped cream tis fair
    she sang of love and weather in love's grasp
    neither hides amongst rocks along the reef
    nor washes to shore in clumps of sea grass
    yet must be found for these are my belief -

    while love's box is replete - songs of merry days,
    the beach is a good walk for remembrance
    of love in the past, so much is sweet lust
    bring on the surf and the sharp sting of rays
    from the jelly fish, whose transluscence
    invades my senses, yet, for now, i trust" - olderman
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I love your peom......it's lovable.....and lovely....jubbly
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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