Away

Being Enlightened

Sometimes...
I just wanna
get in my little boat
and row away,
from all the yesterdays
that shadow today,
the lies they say,
the games they play,
the mind's decay,
the false friendships
that fray...
I just wanna be gay.
Remember when it was okay
to say?
Just feel I gotta get away
to enjoy today.
Is that okay?

coleen

always and always and ever after that

nailz100

Reminds me of happy gilmore. "I might just go down by the bay...I could stay all day and make things out of clay...I just may" My two favorite lady poets, both on one thread...

trappedinmyradio

i like the rhythm...up and down in my head. that's the part i really like - the sticking out part for me. and you also employed a device that i often use, "sometimes..." i like that.

Being Enlightened wrote:

the lies they say,
the games they play,
the mind's decay,
the false friendships
that fray...

Being Enlightened

You always make me , coleen!

nailz!!! LMFAO! Happy Gilmore! Now there was a movie I SO didn't care to see but when I did, I actually enjoyed. That Shooter McGavin was a delightful dickhead! I feel so blah today, so I just thought I'd say that I'd rather be away!

trappedinmyradio--the rythym in your head went up and down, up and down, up and down... Glad you liked and thanks for the response! I like to use "sometimes" often myself, it just works in so many ways, especially when you're just kinda pondering things.