The world is melting...

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
I feel it from the hole in the above.
Shower us in soot and hot lava
as Mother Nature's john's wear stares
of "I don't cares!",
and those who fake their prayers
bear down on the throats
of the escaping goats...
The old scroats coats
reek of putresence and essence
of black gold.
Only some really see the stories of old
and grow cold,
trying to make sure all are told,
try to break the mold,
that grows on the underbelly
of the nameless, faceless, careless,
porcelain,
frigid, rigid,
concrete, callous, catastrophic company.

We are vampires!
We are.
We are.
HA! HA!
We love guns
and shooting stars...

Shoot me up to MARS!
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    very nice :)
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    WE ARE ALL VAMPIRES!!!!!!!

    YES!!!!!!!

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    Nice poem BE.Very original:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    you Vamps-

    I like your stuff
  • movingfingermovingfinger Posts: 117
    i really like the rant-like feel of this poem. The rhymes were really effective as they did not feel forced at all, great example of creative word play.
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,
    Moves on: nor all your Piety nor Wit
    Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
    Nor all your Tears wash out a Word of it

    -- Omar Khayyam
  • That could be a song. It has the makings of being lyrics....very cool.
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    just stopped in to remind ye that eye, i, aye...sees all.

    much love to my sweetest palli. :D
  • Thanks all! :) I had a good time writing this one and it really just kinda flew outta my head and onto the page. I'm glad you all enjoyed!









    *coleen, you're too quiet--like a phantom! ;) Love n' hugs right back atcha and a request that you post one of your poems one day soon! Kisskiss :)*
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938

    *coleen, you're too quiet--like a phantom! ;) Love n' hugs right back atcha and a request that you post one of your poems one day soon! Kisskiss :)*


    perhaps, perhaps...perhaps. l'amour has that effect on me....mind just racing with lovely lines and whispered prayers. why is it that when the heart is humming or aching that the words swirl and whirl and spill right out?
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