Unclothe

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Unclothe

And what?
When we've talked ourselves out of all the words in the great, big universe,
What then?
Do we find a more sensual language?
I vow for that!
Forget the cold indifferent hellos
And the souless goodbyes.
I want to speak with my tongue parting your lips,
Uncoaxed hands on my hips,
Breath, breathing like a sweet symphony in my ear,
Your cold hands in my cold hands,
And I shall place them, ever so gently on my warm heart,
Where there is always a place for you,
Even when I can't find the right words to tell you so.






:)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • El_KabongEl_Kabong Posts: 4,141
    ewwww get a room you 2!!

    Just kidding, i really liked it.

    "Forget the cold indifferent hellos
    And the souless goodbyes."

    i love those 2 lines.

    :)
    standin above the crowd
    he had a voice that was strong and loud and
    i swallowed his facade cos i'm so
    eager to identify with
    someone above the crowd
    someone who seemed to feel the same
    someone prepared to lead the way
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    not that i don't feel honored that i get a preview of your gorgeous meanderings....but i can't tell you how happy i am to see that you posted one here.

    for a moment it's like being back at the hut with all of our old & new friends - sharing lovely lines :)
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    To make you really feel at home in the old hut.

    Spankings are needed and if that dosen't suffice then the cock on the wall is saying it is 12:00. ;)
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    admittedly the hut got a little raunchy at times but what i miss most is the love and fun we had playing together every day.

    i promise, even though i'm getting all wistful about the good ole hut, i'll keep it out of the gutter. ;)
  • :)

    Much love to all you guys! Thank you!



    *aside*

    Coleen, you get to preview because you've always been kind and caring and loving and supportive and sweet and that counts BIG time!

    AND (gee, I like that word today! :) ) coleen, it was always in the name of love and funtimes! Always! :D

    Sheesh, I may just share another while I'm sitting here even! :)

    Take good care, all! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ok im just gonna keep bumping your poetry cause i absolutely love it!
    What can i say that hasnt already been said?
    oh ya
    Rubber Biscuit?
    haha.

    hemmuni hummni manna munni mannanna.
    LMAO
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • wow, I absolutey loved it
    If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.

    Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.
    -Oscar Wilde
  • Lady O'Maine!!!!!

    Now a wish sandwich is that kind of a sandwich wherein you do have 2 slices of bread and you WISH you had some meat...

    Bow-bow-ooo-ooo-ooo-OOO! ;) ,


    charles (in charge) :D

    in the silences *hush-hush*
    there is such volume
    hear the golden whispers scream


    NotjustAbookamongstthemanyontheshelf!

    Sometimes,
    words come,
    Sometimes,
    they lay
    upon the page,
    Sometimes,
    I'm glad I've let them rest there

    Dear book, thank you for reading me! :D

    :)

    THANK YOUS!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    Oh yes BE

    you are so right
    some of our words have become pointless
    and badly used
    good morning sounds so dumb and care free
    some say "bless you" instinctively i guess
    there is no honesty no more
    we are all machines
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • Thank you, Sound! Long time, no see. You reminded me of a song---I hope I got the words right.

    :)

    Man Machines
    by Pete Townsend

    "Man makes machines
    To man the machines
    That make the machines
    That make the machines

    Make a machine
    To make a machine
    And man and machine
    Will make a machine

    To break the machines
    That make the machines"





    Bloody machines!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Unclothe

    And what?
    When we've talked ourselves out of all the words in the great, big universe,
    What then?
    Do we find a more sensual language?
    I vow for that!
    Forget the cold indifferent hellos
    And the souless goodbyes.
    I want to speak with my tongue parting your lips,
    Uncoaxed hands on my hips,
    Breath, breathing like a sweet symphony in my ear,
    Your cold hands in my cold hands,
    And I shall place them, ever so gently on my warm heart,
    Where there is always a place for you,
    Even when I can't find the right words to tell you so.






    :)


    What a beautiful poem. did you write this ? wow.
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • I thank you, muchly! Very muchly! :)

    Yup, I wrote 'er. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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