Jello Sea

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Swimming
In your sticky,
Your icky,
Black tar mind.
And you struggle,
Your thoughts so thick
With loathing
Of people n' things
You know not.
And you don't see
How it weighs on you,
And you don't see
The cancer eating you,
And you don't see
Other drowning,
You just invite more to join you.




I observe from a distance,
Looks like a pool party
That Freddy Kruger crashed.





:D
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • Swimming
    In your sticky,
    Your icky,
    Black tar mind.
    And you struggle,
    Your thoughts so thick
    With loathing
    Of people n' things
    You know not.
    And you don't see
    How it weighs on you,
    And you don't see
    The cancer eating you,
    And you don't see
    Others drowning,
    You just invite more to join you.




    I observe from a distance,
    Looks like a pool party
    That Freddy Kruger crashed.









    Sorry, saw a typo. :D Think that's it.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
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  • Awesome Possum!!!!
    Gosh I missed ya!
    So glad your posting!
    Keep it up!
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
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