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Moonset

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Incandescent.
Irresistable.
Immersion into reality,
she shines
on tides of troubled souls,
makes me feel whole,

I,
ride the wave,
I,
know I'm saved,
I,
took my own hand,
I,
know just where I stand,

Too shy to...
Too scared to...
Too blind to...

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

I know it can never be better,
I know it can never be worse,
the tide, she is constant,
she is rebirth.
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    top o' the list of my top five or so poets....miss b.e. to be sure. :D
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Nice work.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :p coleen, you're so sweet! I'm honoured to be in your top 5. :)

    AND

    Thanks for the compliment, partner in crime (aka. twin2 ;) ). :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh, good heavens
    the moon shone through
    rain clouds
    full

    mmh!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    nice flow...good one.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this one!
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    PN, the moon was shining beautifully last night, around 8pm, it had that gorgeous orangish hue and was huge and hanging like a picture in the night sky. It wasn't full but it was still wonderful. :)

    Thanks so much, depopulationINCORPORATED & justam, glad you enjoyed. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Very very nice BE.

    Very true to heart?
    You and thoreau:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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