A circle of light

Being Enlightened
Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A circle of light
fell upon me,
I looked out
across a silent sea
that patiently waited
for a strong breeze
to pick it up
and carry it,
as a lover,
to wet parched shores.
I sailed out to the centre
and spun until I spilled
out across the waters,
until I felt every drop
of everyone
and in turn,
they felt me.
A circle of light
fell upon me,
I opened up
and was free!

:)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • sistanumsy
    sistanumsy Posts: 218
    Wow, such a powerful message.

    'I felt every drop
    of everyone
    and in turn,
    they felt me.
    A circle of light
    fell upon me,
    I opened up
    and was free!'
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Thanks for the read and the compliment, sistanumsy. :) Very much appreciated!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    is it your halo, love?


    :D
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    PastaNazi wrote:
    is it your halo, love?


    :D

    LOL! Nah, I lost that on my way back down from heaven. :p:p LOL!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Very nice BE....love this one! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    wow, great piece BE
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    {{{{twin1, depop}}}}!!! :) Thanks guys. You're both so sweet! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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