On The Rocks

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
The sun glistens
off lakes lips,
I'm reminded
of years past,
when I awoke
before dawn,
nature my
only companion,
we cozied up
together
on the rocks,
shared some tea,
relished our
easy company,
enjoying
a few
precious hours
of freedom,
of peace!
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    "lakes lips"


    quite nice.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    The sun glistens
    off lakes lips,
    I'm reminded
    of years past,
    when I awoke
    before dawn,
    nature my
    only companion,
    we cozied up
    together
    on the rocks,
    shared some tea,
    relished our
    easy company,
    enjoying
    a few
    precious hours
    of freedom,
    of peace!
    BE....
    very nice and ENLIGHTENING!
    Very simple and sweet.
    Keep writing you masterful poet you!:):):):):):):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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