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Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When I look into your eyes
I see rainbows and fireworks,
I see a man who knows who he is
and is not afraid to be who he is,
and I am not afraid to love you,
with every fibre of my being,
with every beat of my heart,
with every bounce in my step,
with every flip of my hair,
with every thought that I think,
with every word that I speak...
You are a part of everything in my life,
you are my life!
I could be standing on the lip of the Pacific
and you, on the Atlantic,
and still I would not feel alone,
only lonely for your smiling face,
which I would still see
with each blink of my eyes
as your image is gently burned into my mind,
*hearts entwined,
your hand in mine*
You move through my blood stream
and I relish the love that keeps it flowing.
We walk to the rythym of our heartbeat
and we shall walk,
together,
just us,
side by side,
forever.


:)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    this is the reason i try to log on....beauty and love from BE. :D
  • that's a very lovely sentiment and the speed/pace is just right.. i enjoyed this poem very much!
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • {{{{coleen}}}}, thank you so much! :) You are always so kind to me and I love ya for it! I only wish I could entice you to share some of your lovely poetry because I've always enjoyed the genuine sweetness in your words. :)

    And I thank you, Dreams Of Red! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'd sure like to see more from you 'round these here parts too! :) I recall you saying you'd post part 2 of "To My Daimonion" awhile back but I've yet to see it--where it be?? :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Whoa...........BE............you must really be in love.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • You move through my blood stream
    and I relish the love that keeps it flowing.
    We walk to the rythym of our heartbeat
    and we shall walk,
    together,
    just us,
    side by side,
    forever.

    it feels good to get that back...i would say so. very nice, indeed.
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • :D Oh, even flow?, you know I am, sheesh! :D

    And trappedinmyradio, it feels fantastic! :) Thank you! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    hahahahaha! You said "fibre"

    I love to see BE in good moods... and feeling happy in her heart
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    {{{{coleen}}}}, thank you so much! :) You are always so kind to me and I love ya for it! I only wish I could entice you to share some of your lovely poetry because I've always enjoyed the genuine sweetness in your words. :)

    kindness has nothing to do with it, you are a treasure my palli and don't you ever forget it.

    i've logged on a million times to share a little something but we all know that l'amour is what moves me and what i write isn't exactly poetry. me thinks, my thoughts are best kept to myself. ;)
  • And I thank you, Dreams Of Red! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'd sure like to see more from you 'round these here parts too! :) I recall you saying you'd post part 2 of "To My Daimonion" awhile back but I've yet to see it--where it be?? :D



    haha busted! i knew that was gonna come up sooner or later.. i'm just glad it turned out to be later ;) i suppose you also would like me to post part III? well i will regardless, and i couldn't have left 'these parts' without fulfilling my duties, and yes, there are more than one. the poems will be in the larger forum, but they are still for you Being Enlightened ;)...and you are too kind, by the way.
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    thats awesome to share i will try

    i have to call its in my heart
    i have to write its in my heart
    i will try sincerity
    yet many times i hear them
    laughing at me
    im strong though

    im glad you were there to soak it up
    in your hands im a flying dove
    a magic show for adults to see
    to take a step back
    and dream again
    like children do

    like your poem says
    hand in hand
    forever
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • El_KabongEl_Kabong Posts: 4,141
    wow...that was...just flippin amazing!! absolutely beautiful! Seriously, that was really beautiful :)
    standin above the crowd
    he had a voice that was strong and loud and
    i swallowed his facade cos i'm so
    eager to identify with
    someone above the crowd
    someone who seemed to feel the same
    someone prepared to lead the way
  • CRAN!!! :) Thank ya! You're a honey!

    coleeny beany, you keep 'em to yourself if you like but I always thought you wrote poetry--no matter what you say. :) Viva l'amour!!!!!!!!

    Hee Hee! Gotcha, Dreams of Red :D--I'm glad you'll be fulfilling your duties and I'm honoured that you're posting them for me!!!! :):)

    Thanks for your poetic response, lovin' kind! Ah, to dream like children do....yeah, that'd sure be great! :) Just lovely.

    And El, my friend, you're beautiful!!! :) Thank you so much!!!

    Thank you all from da bottom of my heart--you're all just so damn nice, it's fantastic!!!! I love ya! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    hehehe... you said "fibre"
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  • hehehe... you said "fibre"

    Hee Hee! :D Now you said "fibre", TWICE! :D

    Mmmmm, bran muffins... :p NOT! *GAGS, CHOKES*

    Now go eat some fruit! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    this one to stay at the top like a number one single
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • Holy moly, lovin kind! :) That's very sweet of you! :) Much appreciated! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • tchaliz wrote:
    lucky man
    T


    Awwwww {{{T}}}, thank you! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    I wish I could be like you B.E....
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
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    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    "You move through my bloodstream"......awesome.

    I'm digging the romantic vibe of it...and the idea that it's just you and this other person. I can literally see you both on each coast and nothing but flatness being between you....and smiles on both of your faces.

    Alone. Together.
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  • nailz, just be the best you, you can be! :) I know it's in ya, ya just gotta get past all the shit and see the good in you and let it shine on through. :) Wishing you all the best, my pal!!!!

    sultry, you're a doll, I miss ya! Thank you so much! :)

    And Nothingbetter, your response got me kinda misty eyed. :) I'm so glad you could picture what I was saying, that's wonderful and quite the compliment. Many thanks to you! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    v.v.pretty and cute :)
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • Mr Pyjama wrote:
    v.v.pretty and cute :)


    Thanks, Pyjamaman!!! :)

    I really loved writing this one and I'm so happy that so many of you seemed to enjoy it! It means a lot to me. Thank you all! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • a bump for this one just because it's one of my favorites of mine. :D The sentiments keep me coming back for more. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • passion flows within her veins
    love crashes with the force of the ocean
    this she can not hide
    for surely it woulddrive her insane
    she opens heart
    for two souls embrace
    she gives all her love
    its more than love
    her only devotion


    nive pieve BE

    I really enjoyed it!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • passion flows within her veins
    love crashes with the force of the ocean
    this she can not hide
    for surely it woulddrive her insane
    she opens heart
    for two souls embrace
    she gives all her love
    its more than love
    her only devotion


    nive pieve BE

    I really enjoyed it!

    {{{depopulationINC}}} :):) Schpanksch so much!! I really enjoyed your tag!!!!! :) Hee Hee! "nive pieve" :D:D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • a bump for this one just because it's one of my favorites of mine. :D The sentiments keep me coming back for more. :)


    me too....;)
    change begins with discontent.
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Every piece of yours...ends up being a favorite of mine
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *feels all warm and fuzzy* :):) Thanks guys! :) xoxoxo
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

  • *feels all warm and fuzzy* :):) Thanks guys! :) xoxoxo

    sure thing A... :D
    change begins with discontent.
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