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Being Enlightened
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When I look into your eyes
I see rainbows and fireworks,
I see a man who knows who he is
and is not afraid to be who he is,
and I am not afraid to love you,
with every fibre of my being,
with every beat of my heart,
with every bounce in my step,
with every flip of my hair,
with every thought that I think,
with every word that I speak...
You are a part of everything in my life,
you are my life!
I could be standing on the lip of the Pacific
and you, on the Atlantic,
and still I would not feel alone,
only lonely for your smiling face,
which I would still see
with each blink of my eyes
as your image is gently burned into my mind,
*hearts entwined,
your hand in mine*
You move through my blood stream
and I relish the love that keeps it flowing.
We walk to the rythym of our heartbeat
and we shall walk,
together,
just us,
side by side,
forever.
I see rainbows and fireworks,
I see a man who knows who he is
and is not afraid to be who he is,
and I am not afraid to love you,
with every fibre of my being,
with every beat of my heart,
with every bounce in my step,
with every flip of my hair,
with every thought that I think,
with every word that I speak...
You are a part of everything in my life,
you are my life!
I could be standing on the lip of the Pacific
and you, on the Atlantic,
and still I would not feel alone,
only lonely for your smiling face,
which I would still see
with each blink of my eyes
as your image is gently burned into my mind,
*hearts entwined,
your hand in mine*
You move through my blood stream
and I relish the love that keeps it flowing.
We walk to the rythym of our heartbeat
and we shall walk,
together,
just us,
side by side,
forever.
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
And I thank you, Dreams Of Red! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'd sure like to see more from you 'round these here parts too! I recall you saying you'd post part 2 of "To My Daimonion" awhile back but I've yet to see it--where it be??
it feels good to get that back...i would say so. very nice, indeed.
from my window to yours
And trappedinmyradio, it feels fantastic! Thank you!
I love to see BE in good moods... and feeling happy in her heart
kindness has nothing to do with it, you are a treasure my palli and don't you ever forget it.
i've logged on a million times to share a little something but we all know that l'amour is what moves me and what i write isn't exactly poetry. me thinks, my thoughts are best kept to myself.
haha busted! i knew that was gonna come up sooner or later.. i'm just glad it turned out to be later i suppose you also would like me to post part III? well i will regardless, and i couldn't have left 'these parts' without fulfilling my duties, and yes, there are more than one. the poems will be in the larger forum, but they are still for you Being Enlightened ...and you are too kind, by the way.
see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
i have to call its in my heart
i have to write its in my heart
i will try sincerity
yet many times i hear them
laughing at me
im strong though
im glad you were there to soak it up
in your hands im a flying dove
a magic show for adults to see
to take a step back
and dream again
like children do
like your poem says
hand in hand
forever
he had a voice that was strong and loud and
i swallowed his facade cos i'm so
eager to identify with
someone above the crowd
someone who seemed to feel the same
someone prepared to lead the way
coleeny beany, you keep 'em to yourself if you like but I always thought you wrote poetry--no matter what you say. Viva l'amour!!!!!!!!
Hee Hee! Gotcha, Dreams of Red --I'm glad you'll be fulfilling your duties and I'm honoured that you're posting them for me!!!!
Thanks for your poetic response, lovin' kind! Ah, to dream like children do....yeah, that'd sure be great! Just lovely.
And El, my friend, you're beautiful!!! Thank you so much!!!
Thank you all from da bottom of my heart--you're all just so damn nice, it's fantastic!!!! I love ya!
Hee Hee! Now you said "fibre", TWICE!
Mmmmm, bran muffins... NOT! *GAGS, CHOKES*
Now go eat some fruit!
Awwwww {{{T}}}, thank you!
INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
I'm digging the romantic vibe of it...and the idea that it's just you and this other person. I can literally see you both on each coast and nothing but flatness being between you....and smiles on both of your faces.
Alone. Together.
EV - St. Louis 7/1/11 ** Tulsa 11/19/12
sultry, you're a doll, I miss ya! Thank you so much!
And Nothingbetter, your response got me kinda misty eyed. I'm so glad you could picture what I was saying, that's wonderful and quite the compliment. Many thanks to you!
Thanks, Pyjamaman!!!
I really loved writing this one and I'm so happy that so many of you seemed to enjoy it! It means a lot to me. Thank you all!
love crashes with the force of the ocean
this she can not hide
for surely it woulddrive her insane
she opens heart
for two souls embrace
she gives all her love
its more than love
her only devotion
nive pieve BE
I really enjoyed it!
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
{{{depopulationINC}}} Schpanksch so much!! I really enjoyed your tag!!!!! Hee Hee! "nive pieve"
me too....;)
*feels all warm and fuzzy* Thanks guys! xoxoxo
sure thing A...