Quiddity

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Frist, plunged, kicking and screaming, into the light,
not knowing left from right,
putty running through the fingers.

Second, together, we were walking hand in hand,
rolling in the caressing sand,
inside one another, tenderly tied.

Third, something stranger, feared as we know not,
'til the day we've gone to rot,
the light returns, we swim the mind.





(Just a little somethin', somethin' I penned after re-reading "The Great and Secret Show" by Clive Barker. :) It's a really terrific book, IMO and my little blurb doesn't do it the justice it deserves but I figured, what they heck, I'll post it. Quiddity is the dream sea that, according to the story, we visit 3 times in our lives--once at birth, the next when you sleep with the one you truly love and who loves you the same and, finally, at the end of your days. :) )
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Very interesting...BE.
    Come now.ROLLLING in the sand?Isnt that a little explicit for tis webpage?
    I've written meaner things to Kat!!!!!I wanna hear of some skin baby!
    SEX!!!!PURE SEX!!!!I want it all!!!!!:D:D:D:D

    Just kiddin witcha...!!!!:(:D

    It was lovely....interesting!

    MORE SEX ON THE BOARD!!!!I"M FEELING Randy!!!!:D
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali wrote:
    MORE SEX ON THE BOARD!!!!I"M FEELING Randy!!!!:D

    You're FEELING Randy???? You saucey little minx!!! ;):D

    Thanks for the comment, Ali! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    lol...

    minx... never heard that one before :D good'n fo sho


    i do likee dis peom, miss enlightened

    many tanks :D
  • PastaNazi wrote:
    lol...

    minx... never heard that one before :D good'n fo sho


    i do likee dis peom, miss enlightened

    many tanks :D

    :D Lurve ta see ya laffin', Nazzi! :D

    A BIG danka pour vous!!!! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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