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The Fire

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sulking sins
with brushed palms,
perfect pink, upon pink,
probed,
as waves transfer
from the ether
to the nether,
tantalizing tastes,
tongues try teasing,
pleasing, pushing, pulling,
pulsating,
*unh*
undertaking
and understanding
that any hand shook
has shaked.
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • Spook FishSpook Fish Posts: 241
    this is cool. good stuff
    Dont take drugs and be a loser
    wear a pink shirt and go down the boozer
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) Why thank you, Spooky Fisherman! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh shyt...

    i think i know these ppl!


    :) nice one, enli
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    PastaNazi wrote:
    oh shyt...

    i think i know these ppl!


    :) nice one, enli

    :D

    Shook hands, did you? :p:D

    And thanks, PastaNaziator!!! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    i love alliteration - i love it in stories, poems, speech...whatever...there are so many images that can be taken from this. thanks for sharing.
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    trappedinmyradio wrote:
    i love alliteration - i love it in stories, poems, speech...whatever...there are so many images that can be taken from this. thanks for sharing.

    Yeah, trapped, I love when I can make it work for me! :) I'm glad it's invoked many images for you--I know what I was getting at when I wrote it but I do like the reader to get their own meaning from it. Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    GO BE!:)

    What do you do when all the hands have been shook?!!!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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