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Swallowed II

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm captivated by your succulent aroma,
my hand can't help but...
reach out,
touch you,
pull you
to my lips.
My teeth pierce
and I relish
the sensation
of your sweet
juices,
trickling down my
throat.
I swallow you...





and then throw away the core.



:D
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Howard Stern just called to ask if it was okay if he touches himself while he reads this on the air. :eek:
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I'd be insulted if he didn't! :p:D

    And hey, here's the original. I posted it a few years back but since I posted the new one, why not re-share the oldie, eh! :D

    Swallowed

    Look so perfect
    I remove your covering
    Naked for all to see
    Hold you in my hand
    Even more enticing
    Lick my lips with anticipation
    Open my mouth
    Take you in
    So smooth on my tongue
    A mouth full of sweet, sticky goodness
    I swallow you down
    Bit by bit
    Inch by inch
    Until you are completely consumed




    And then throw away the peel
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    He is on the line again and wanting to know if you will read this one to him live on the show while he touches himself.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :p Heh, heh...hmmmm, only if he promises to put me in that SPANK machine to get me all primed and ready! ;):D:D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Howard's gotta SPANK machine?
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    PastaNazi wrote:
    Howard's gotta SPANK machine?

    :D Apparently he does. They call it the ROBOSPANKER. :D
    I think taking a few whacks could be fun times! :p LOL! Mind you, I think you'd get a better sound if it were a skin on skin endeavour. ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    That's very sexy and sensual. Yowza!
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Go BE.....
    You always write things full of goodies!!!!!:D
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :D Apparently he does. They call it the ROBOSPANKER. :D
    I think taking a few whacks could be fun times! :p LOL! Mind you, I think you'd get a better sound if it were a skin on skin endeavour. ;)

    wholeheart concurrence, milove
    wholeheart

    ain' no robo got skin

    xoxspankxox
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    this thread is just bursting at the seems, nice poems gals
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    hotttttttttttt
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • AngelofIndifferenceAngelofIndifference Posts: 89
    I love the punch line. And everything sounds so wet. Nice
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Thanks, Nothingbetter, I like to write these silly little sexy poems. Mmmm, mmmm, squishy bananas and crunchy golden delicious apples--nothin' could be finer! :)

    :) Hey Ali! Thank you! Goodies are just so damn good--mother nature's fruit. :)

    :D LOL! Ms. Nazi, I hope ta hang that we never see the day that metal wears skin!!!

    ETE!!! :p:D "bursting at the seems" :D Hee Hee! That made me larf!

    violet ray, ray of sunshine! :) Thank you! Hey, I do feel a little clammy! ;)

    Sweet AngelofIndifference! :) That's precisely what I was going for!

    Thanks all for reading! They're most fun to write and hey, who knows, maybe I'll add a part III some day. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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