Burning Midnight

Being Enlightened · October 2005

Black serpentine
coils, roil
behind your eyes.

Fire and brimstone
flames, claim
your burning midnight smile.

All ashes,
dust must
be the beginning's end.

She whispers,
"Hotels, motels,
water only cleans the skin
but I'm burning from
deep down, deep, within."

Kisses pierce the flesh,
touch,
the bone.
Her burning midnight smile
so much like your own.

Righteous Jammer · October 2005

Love to ending...I enjoyed reading this one...

DopeBeastie · October 2005

love the rhythm, miss being

coleen · October 2005

many thanks to our most beloved sentient being....miss being enlightened and her passionate offerings

twin2 · October 2005

I too like the ending.

Being Enlightened · October 2005

{{{{{{{LADIES}}}}}}}}

I really appreciate that you all take the time to read what I write, thank you so much!

PJfaninmaine · October 2005

All I can say is wow,,,,,,,,, i actually got goosebumps reading this one. Very Very passionate! cudos girlfriend,,, such feeling in this. Kind of made me horny haha. then again wouldnt take much! dammit I hate that dam evil twin of mine! haha
I have been writing but only funny silly ones about my friend and I,,,,
I write them when we are getting drunk so noone here would relate,,, but I will try to get serious again eventually. Lots going on,,,,I have three kids graduating in June!!! ughhh got any valium? Now you wonder why I drink? haha...
So good to see ya

Abookamongstthemany · October 2005

Such beautifully desriptive words, BE! I could completely feel this one.

Ali · October 2005

Well..be...
passion only fuels the fire.

allison vigh

Being Enlightened · October 2005

Hey PJfaninmaine!!!

Always good to see you! WOW! 3 kids graduating??? :eek: That's awesome and I know you're very proud of 'em. Funny and silly is good for the soul, girl and if it makes you feel good, that's what counts.

Here's hoping you share some of your poems again, you horny devil, you!

{{{Abook}}}, thanks for stopping by and feeling this.

The poem, I mean.

Missing your presence on the homefront! Thank you so much for your kind words.

Ali, "fire's burning, fire's burning, draw nearer, draw nearer, in the gloaming, in the gloaming, come sing and be merry"

Just throw some more passion on the fire and she'll be burning for eternity!

ISN · October 2005

how did I miss this one.....I guess I'm just not reading everything these days.....but such a startling title should have hooked me.....anyway.....I love it!!!! passion is in fashion....again......it's so dark and sexy.....hey.....it's creepy hehehehehe.......creepy in a gorgeous sense......like a dark stranger......oh, they're the best......(unless they're blonde, and then they're even better!!!!)......:D

Being Enlightened · October 2005

LOL! Oh ISN, thanks for the larf! Blonde with green eyes and they're super yummy.

Thank you for having a read and enjoying it!

Being Enlightened · August 2006

Looking through some oldies to share with a pal and I stumbled across this one and I just dig it so, yeah, here it is again since I'm lacking the time for new material as of late.

And seeing some of the usernames in here--ladies whose cyber-company I do so miss... I couldn't resist.

even flow? · August 2006

You have gone over your quota of shameless bumps for the year. One more and there will be a temporary ban enforced. Da board

Holey Ghost · August 2006

Very seductive BE, I see I may be new to the party
but not the first one to be naughty

If you don't mind,
May I copy (or better yet, you post it on the Naughty Boy thread, and I'll add my mojo in response)

Being Enlightened · August 2006

even flow? wrote:

You have gone over your quota of shameless bumps for the year. One more and there will be a temporary ban enforced. Da board

I should be punished--severly!

Holey Ghost · August 2006

even flow? wrote:

You have gone over your quota of shameless bumps for the year. One more and there will be a temporary ban enforced. Da board

Ahhhhh, cut her a break
if not for her bump
I would not have seen
her masterful seductive artistry
so lean n' but never mean

Holey Ghost · August 2006

Being Enlightened wrote:

I should be punished--severly!

maybe a feather spanking is in order

Holey Ghost · August 2006

Being Enlightened wrote:

Black serpentine
coils, roil
behind your eyes.

Fire and brimstone
flames, claim
your burning midnight smile.

All ashes,
dust must
be the beginning's end.

She whispers,
"Hotels, motels,
water only cleans the skin
but I'm burning from
deep down, deep, within."

Kisses pierce the flesh,
touch,
the bone.
Her burning midnight smile
so much like your own.

Charcoal eyes pierce the night
Embers burn releasing heat
Long past midnight

That longing look
Sweet embraces
Smiling faces

Whispering secrets of the soul
To only each other
They truly know

Kisses gentle and sweet
Keep the embers aflame
Till the sun rises once again

The orange rays dance upon bare skin
Inviting play as the midnight smiles
Touch flesh and bone, burning, yearning
From deep down, deep within

civ_eng_girl · August 2006

Being Enlightened wrote:

"fire's burning, fire's burning, draw nearer, draw nearer, in the gloaming, in the gloaming, come sing and be merry"

BE, you are SUCH a girl-guide nerd..... i love it!!

:D:D

hott poem by the way...

civ_eng_girl · August 2006

Being Enlightened wrote:

I should be punished--severly!

get a room! :rolleyes:

hehehe....

Being Enlightened · August 2006

Holey Ghost wrote:

Charcoal eyes pierce the night
Embers burn releasing heat
Long past midnight

That longing look
Sweet embraces
Smiling faces

Whispering secrets of the soul
To only each other
They truly know

Kisses gentle and sweet
Keep the embers aflame
Till the sun rises once again

The orange rays dance upon bare skin
Inviting play as the midnight smiles
Touch flesh and bone, burning, yearning
From deep down, deep within

Flushed flesh
fuelled by the fire,
retreat under sheets
of demanding desires.

Urgent utterings,
offering up of the soul,
bitten and written
in dust and charred coal.

Softest seeker
of a serene serenade,
sweet smile, sweet chile,
this match is made.

Whirring whimpers,
intensified moans,
her burning midnight smile,
so much like your own.

Being Enlightened · August 2006

civ_eng_girl wrote:

BE, you are SUCH a girl-guide nerd..... i love it!! :D:D

hott poem by the way...

"twist me and turn me
and call me an elf,
I looked in the water
and there saw
myself!"

"Always be prepared"!

Hee Hee! Who'd a thought a good 'lil girl guide could turn into such a whacky woman???

Hee Hee! Must be the sexy scorpio in me, civvy! Thanks for reading.

I don't need a room, I gots me a whole damn house! LOL!

Being Enlightened · August 2006

Being Enlightened wrote:

"twist me and turn me
and call me an elf,
I looked in the water
and there saw
myself!"

HA HA HA! I think it's "show me an elf" not "call me an elf"! LOL! Me, an elf! As if! I surely don't meet the height requirements.

Holey Ghost · August 2006

(this is a nice duet we have going BE, copied here in full)

Burning Midnight
________________________________________
Black serpentine
coils, roil
behind your eyes.

Fire and brimstone
flames, claim
your burning midnight smile.

All ashes,
dust must
be the beginning's end.

She whispers,
"Hotels, motels,
water only cleans the skin
but I'm burning from
deep down, deep, within."

Kisses pierce the flesh,
touch,
the bone.
Her burning midnight smile
so much like your own.

Charcoal eyes pierce the night
Embers burn releasing heat
Long past midnight

That longing look
Sweet embraces
Smiling faces

Whispering secrets of the soul
To only each other
They truly know

Kisses gentle and sweet
Keep the embers aflame
Till the sun rises once again

The orange rays dance upon bare skin
Inviting play as the midnight smiles
Touch flesh and bone, burning, yearning
From deep down, deep within

Flushed flesh
fuelled by the fire,
retreat under sheets
of demanding desires.

Urgent utterings,
offering up of the soul,
bitten and written
in dust and charred coal.

Softest seeker
of a serene serenade,
sweet smile, sweet chile,
this match is made.

Whirring whimpers,
intensified moans,
her burning midnight smile,
so much like your own.

Lips intertwined
Hips rockin’
Legs reaching for deeper ground
Breathing quicker uttering loving sounds

Midnight colors
In the darkness of the night
Bring happiness and ecstatic release
As the darkness turns to light

Spirits float on Cloud 9
As their bodies are set free
In the peacefulness of midnight
As burning desires of the flesh have been met
Minds still
As all our dreams are fulfilled

eMMI · August 2006

ooooohh, BE, very nice.

kind of a surprising read for the end of a day like today but I'm not complaining.

:D:D:D I just felt compelled (that's the 2nd time today I'm using that word by the way.

lol. ) to open this thread, I didn't even look at whose poem it was.

:D

really, BE and Holey Ghost.. sizzling!

:D

:) romantically hot methinks!

:D:):)

Holey Ghost · August 2006

thanks eMMI !!

just 2 creative souls at work and play
what more can we say
Is it midnight again
and time to do it, do it, kiss the flesh
get fresh, mesh, gel, swell
and finish our tail
woman to male
a midnight rendevouz or two
where the oil burns till dawn
and the fire is never gone

Being Enlightened · August 2006

eMMI wrote:

ooooohh, BE, very nice.

kind of a surprising read for the end of a day like today but I'm not complaining. :D:D:D I just felt compelled (that's the 2nd time today I'm using that word by the way. lol. ) to open this thread, I didn't even look at whose poem it was. :D

really, BE and Holey Ghost.. sizzling! :D :) romantically hot methinks! :D:):)

Hey, eMMI-lou--thank you!

'Tis most fun bantering with H.G. Swells

, I must say. Many a blushing smile, for sure!

Hmmm, I think I'll add a little sumthin', sumthin' as it seems my companion isn't quite done with me yet!

I ride your tide
so, open wide,
the look in your eyes
and, thrust of your thighs,
my fall to your rise,
all free and yet, tied,

try something not tried,
and all the spies
hear our cries,
'cause we've materialized
from where we hide,
all shame aside...

Holey Ghost · August 2006

And what a high tide it is
As we do our creative biz
Wave after wave
Crashing, crashing
Moving further into the shore
The sand pushing back
Begging for no more
But in the end
Converging with the sea
You and me
Not caring ‘bout the staring
Of the tourists above the nook
As our motion with the ocean
Gives us a reason for believin’
To sizzle and cook
Only stopping, for a breath
And more potion

Being Enlightened · August 2006

I am the shoreline,
you are the sea,
I lie in waiting
for you to cover me,
slippery wet kisses
move over my skin,
you fill me up
'til I overflow passion,
I shiver with each trickle
and tingle with each thrust,
the shore,
the sea,
you,
and me,
dripping
in our lust.

Holey Ghost · August 2006

Your white and black sand pearls beckon me
You are the land and I am the sea
My waves want to slowly melt into your shore
Building up crests to crash
Each a little higher and deeper
than the one before

With each wave I ride life a surfer into your sand
I put the motion of my ocean into your hands
With the rise of each tide
We dance to the moon
and go for a waving craving ride

And when the moon is full
I feel your strongest gravitation pull
pushing me further
further, into your shore
A little longer, a little deeper
than the one before

Burning Midnight

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