Alright

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There are those days,
you know,
the kind where...,
where,
the clouds roll in,
and,
you feel them
move within you,
you just can't help it!

Your eyes get hazy,
your mind,
wanders places,
places
that it doesn't often go,
and,
everything smells
metallic.

Then the wind moves,
it shifts,
the gray fades,
and,
the
sun winks a smile
on your weary soul,
a hint
of java's in the air...
let's you know,

it
will
all
be
alright!


:)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Brilliantly written, I'm envious. Thanks for sharing!
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • Aw, coach :), you're too kind! Thanks!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    There are those days,
    you know,
    the kind where...,
    where,
    the clouds roll in,
    and,
    you feel them
    move within you,
    you just can't help it!

    Your eyes get hazy,
    your mind,
    wanders places,
    places
    that it doesn't often go,
    and,
    everything smells
    metallic.

    Then the wind moves,
    it shifts,
    the gray fades,
    and,
    the
    sun winks a smile
    on your weary soul,
    a hint
    of java's in the air...
    let's you know,

    it
    will
    all
    be
    alright!


    :)

    I like this one BE!
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  • BE...that put me on Cloud 9 and I actually...felt your delicious descriptions
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • i agree, m'dear... it is lovely :)
    and you are absolutely correct, it is going to be all-right
  • "Everthing's gonna be alright--everything's gonna be alright--no woman, no cry..." ;)

    {{{{AM!!!HG!!!PN!!!}}}}} Thanks me pallis! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • hey! everybody up on the board tonight... we got japan, england, canada and several points here in the starfield... represent!

    group hug :D
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I'm Ireland. ;)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    PastaNazi wrote:
    hey! everybody up on the board tonight... we got japan, england, canada and several points here in the starfield... represent!

    group hug :D

    {{{{group}}}} *kisses too*
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • PastaNazi wrote:
    hey! everybody up on the board tonight... we got japan, england, canada and several points here in the starfield... represent!

    group hug :D

    Yeh, yeah, I be representin' da Great White North, baby!

    ****KISSSSESSS HUUUGGGGSSSSSSSS****
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • I'm Ireland. ;)

    Nice to meet you Ireland! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • I'm Ireland. ;)

    are ye 'ome for the week end, love? ;)
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Yeh, yeah, I be representin' da Great White North, baby!

    ****KISSSSESSS HUUUGGGGSSSSSSSS****

    Don't be stealing all the Great White North thunder BE I'm here too ya know ;)
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • PastaNazi wrote:
    hey! everybody up on the board tonight... we got japan, england, canada and several points here in the starfield... represent!

    group hug :D


    Yes, Group Hug...I'm holding the Magnificent Pacific as we speak..as the sun sinks over the horizon,

    where's just rizin'

    in Japan
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • and we've got the dark night settling in here, new mexico way
    morning, evil

    g'night y'all
  • so, with all this talent aboard this ship
    before the lights go out
    we should set something asail
    and take a litte poetic trip
    to places beyond, or we're fond

    and toss a pebble into a pond
    and let the ripples

    expand across the universe

    in...........................verse
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • coachchris wrote:
    Don't be stealing all the Great White North thunder BE I'm here too ya know ;)

    :D My good man, I'm happy to share it with ya! Hoser!!!!! :p
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • PastaNazi wrote:
    and we've got the dark night settling in here, new mexico way
    morning, evil

    g'night y'all

    Was nice seein' ya, {{{Rache}}}!!!! Love you, me chica! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    PastaNazi wrote:
    and we've got the dark night settling in here, new mexico way
    morning, evil

    g'night y'all

    G'nite sweetie!
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • so, with all this talent aboard this ship
    before the lights go out
    we should set something asail
    and take a litte poetic trip
    to places beyond, or we're fond

    and toss a pebble into a pond
    and let the ripples

    expand across the universe

    in...........................verse

    each under the same moon
    the same sun
    exchanging our breath
    our thoughts
    our ideas
    brothers, sisters
    far, near
    all of us
    connected
    all of us
    here

    :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    each under the same moon
    the same sun
    exchanging our breath
    our thoughts
    our ideas
    brothers, sisters
    far, near
    all of us
    connected
    all of us
    here

    :)

    Sweet one BE! :)
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • justam wrote:
    Sweet one BE! :)


    ditto that, justam

    nite to you's off in the bionic blue kitchen :):):)
  • PastaNazi wrote:
    ditto that, justam

    nite to you's off in the bionic blue kitchen :):):)

    :D:D

    Baby, I be in da Bionic Blue Soul Kitchen a life! :D

    Nite-eee, nite, sleep tight!!! Honey-suckle dreams! :)

    Ha, know what's sweet?? You two ladies! :) *muuwahhh*
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • :D:D

    Baby, I be in da Bionic Blue Soul Kitchen a life! :D


    Another inspiring work, B.E!!! love it!

    (although, i'm going to have Bob running through my head all day! :D )
    c'mon little sister, don't shead no tears....


    this reminds me..... we need to go to the Kitch soon..... how's friday? ;):p
    ~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~
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