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Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I have my vices,
and I pay the prices,
still I have my devices,
and what I would like is,
to serve you a big ol' slice
of this scrupmtious crow pie!

:p
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Have more than thou showest,
    Speak less than thou knowest,
    Lend less than thou owest,
    Ride more than thou goest,
    Learn more than thou trowest,
    Set less than thou throwest;
    Leave thy drink and thy whore,
    And keep in-a-door,
    And thou shalt have more
    Than two tens to a score.


    The Fool, King Lear, 1.4 (1605) :)


    I thought your poem made a good antidote to this!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Why thank you, Fins! You're right--it does! That made me smile! :):)

    Hmmm, I heard something about a new offerring from you...*looks left, looks right, looks forward to it* :)

    How's yer noggin'? Hope you're doing well! And certainly glad that rock didn't rattle your marbles around too much--you still got it, Finster! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,289
    When I first read your poem, BE, I thought - She's getting fiesty like Fins! Lo and behold, there's Fins! You silly people. :)
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    LOL! Well, Ms. H, at least I'm in good company. Never been ashamed of my silliness. In fact, a palli from high school nicknamed me Silly. LOL! She'll still call up and say, "Hey, Silly..." :D

    I'm also proud member #269 of the Silly Walks Society! :p *nyuck, nyuck* ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,289
    I want to be fiesty like you guys. I think I need to add more leopard print to my wardrobe.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Ms. Haiku wrote:
    I want to be fiesty like you guys. I think I need to add more leopard print to my wardrobe.

    Hey! Have you been peeking at my wordrobe???!!!! :p What's really scary is that I do like leopard print. Have a loeapard print scarf & mitts set, as well as a leopard print bustier purse...:eek: :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,289
    I have to say that finding out a bustier purse is NOT a bra with an extra space for change is worth reading all of the poetry I don't understand :D
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I really enjoyed this post and thread...thanks for the smiles! Perhaps I need to get some leopard print as well... :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    LOL! Ms. Haiku--you really gotta market that bra, girl! :D By way of some sort of explanation for my little poem--here's the wikipedia definition of the term "to eat (boiled) crow": http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eat_crow . :)

    :) twin1--love to see you smiling! :) Yeeeah, we be a bunch a kool katz all decked out in leopard print---oooo, leopard print AND black strecthy pants!!!!! Now THAT'S a fashion statement!!!! :p:p

    LOL! Not only can't I imagine myself in black stretchy pants without a little breakfast coming back up my throat, imagine Fins donning a pair!!!...actually, I might just like that! REEOWWW!! ;):D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    ...check this one out! :)

    http://www.funny-videos.co.uk/videoMoTheCrow.html

    Too cute! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    I have my vices,
    and I pay the prices,
    still I have my devices,
    and what I would like is,
    to serve you a big ol' slice
    of this scrupmtious crow pie!

    :p


    I read your explanation about the crow.
    having done that I understood better.
    I thought crow pei was you being vindictive as in "The crow" the movie.
    Nice reading!
    thank U.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
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