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For You

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Allow my hair to be a sponge,
my ears, a megaphone,
my hands, a shelter (safe and warm),
my embrace, your coat (you're home).

Allow my voice to be a lullabye,
my legs, a locomotive train,
my back, a ride (hop on inside),
my heart, your open door.

Lover, walk beside me,
along the winding road,
Lover, let's just love, please,
french kiss my very soul.

:)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    A SPONGE!!!!!!


    Isn't this a nice little piece.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    Very Nice!!!!
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    this is somewhere between beautiful and funny :) french kiss my soul :)
    i like it
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this too.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Thanks folks! :) And yes, pacifier, it's a smiley little ditty and I wanted it to come across as a bit silly but still show the good lovey stuffs. Glad you guys enjoyed. :)

    Hee Hee! Yes, even flow?, A SPONGE! *she says doing her best Otto "I like to get blotto" impression* ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    I like this a lot! :)
    wish someone would french kiss my soul. *dreamy*
    this is a piece of poetry that I deffinately could show someone who I feel this way for. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    eMMI wrote:
    I like this a lot! :)
    wish someone would french kiss my soul. *dreamy*
    this is a piece of poetry that I deffinately could show someone who I feel this way for. :)

    :D Hee Hee! *dreamy* Oh eMMI, that makes me think of gals in the 50's, in their poodle skirts, with that far away look in their eyes after seeing their dreamboat hunk pass by!! So cute! :) I'm glad you liked it.

    Here's hoping someone special comes along and slips ya a little tongue. ;):D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    pure beauty...I absolutely loved the end!!!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    a poet wrote:
    pure beauty...I absolutely loved the end!!!!

    Thank you kindly, dear a poet! I'm so glad you like the end and that others seem to too! I used the "french kiss my soul" in a poem a while back but I love it and it sticks with me, that line. It's just so intimate! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :D Hee Hee! *dreamy* Oh eMMI, that makes me think of gals in the 50's, in their poodle skirts, with that far away look in their eyes after seeing their dreamboat hunk pass by!! So cute! :) I'm glad you liked it.

    Here's hoping someone special comes along and slips ya a little tongue. ;):D

    haha. :D
    well, you're welcome, it was my pleasure! :)

    and thank you! ;)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Being Enlightened wrote:

    Here's hoping someone special comes along and slips ya a little tongue. ;):D

    Oh BE...very nice.Just find me the man....:D
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Ali wrote:
    Oh BE...very nice.Just find me the man....:D

    I second that! And the "french kissing the soul" business is sweet and sexy at the same time, very catchy. Thanks for writing that! :o)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I'm not a match maker, nuh-unh! :D But I wish you all good luck in your search for a better man and hope you have some fun along the way. :)

    Thanks for the read and and the comments. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    I'm not a match maker, nuh-unh! :D But I wish you all good luck in your search for a better man and hope you have some fun along the way. :)

    Thanks for the read and and the comments. :)

    but I dont want to find a man.

    :(
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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