100 Proof Pop

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Your embrace shakes through me,
rattles memories free their chains,
unexpected reunions,
anticipated but unprepared.
I want my hug to quell your tremors,
return you just to Dad,
who pet named me, Pitroshe,
bought his girls silk roses at Christmas,
took me to the gold's at Exhibition Place,
my first Jay's game
with my Dad.
Sure, I remember when you forgot me too,
after Brownies,
I waited
and waited,
until Mom came...
I remember,
how she smashed your bottles on the drive,
how she screamed at you,
how she smakced at you,
while I cried
and told her to stop.
Not a new problem, just out of control.
You always snubbed any help...
It got so I was always mad at you too,
acted like I didn't care,
it was easier.
I did my time in a similar hell
(familiar hell),
it all exploded into a fireball after awhile,
and we're the scattered ashes.
When I see you,
I know who it is
but I don't know who you are.
I remember the stumbler,
the guy who had me in the truck
and was riding the guardrail...
but, also the Dad who played catch,
the Dad who took me to see my 1st movie, E.T.
To see you so low,
a hollow, shakey shell,
scrounging for room and board
and a pack of smokes...
I can't understand why you threw away so much for so little.
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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Comments

  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Well written.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    This is very good BE! I liked it alot. I felt it all and pictured it like I was there too. Very descriptive and emotional.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Thanks x 2! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Wow Alfonce you brought some tears to my eyes.
    You've changed your place in this world!
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