In Your Eyes

Being Enlightened
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The day swept me off my feet,
carried me gently
from my altered state
and delivered me
onto a pillow of wind,
drifffffting,
floaaating,
like a snowflake,
riding the ethereal breeze,
I came to a crossroads,
where I had to choose
between the summer’s smile
and winter’s icy stare,
it took me no time to decide
and into the blustering white
I ascended,
higher and higher,
and higher still,
above the snow covered trees,
above the thundering clouds,
above all space and time,
my body sh-sh-shivering, near blue,
and my cold and dry eyes saw
through my frost covered eye lashes,
a shadow approaching,
with each step
I felt warmer,
with each step
I could begin to see clearer,
with each step
I felt my heart beating faster,
with each step
I melted,
until I was a puddle
on the floor
at your feet,
you bent down,
used your shirt
to soak me up,
and then drank me down,
I felt all your warmth
as I twisted and turned
throughout you,
I felt all your love
as I washed through
your bloodstream,
I felt myself seeing,
really seeing things,
I saw the world
through your eyes,
and it was beautiful!!
carried me gently
from my altered state
and delivered me
onto a pillow of wind,
drifffffting,
floaaating,
like a snowflake,
riding the ethereal breeze,
I came to a crossroads,
where I had to choose
between the summer’s smile
and winter’s icy stare,
it took me no time to decide
and into the blustering white
I ascended,
higher and higher,
and higher still,
above the snow covered trees,
above the thundering clouds,
above all space and time,
my body sh-sh-shivering, near blue,
and my cold and dry eyes saw
through my frost covered eye lashes,
a shadow approaching,
with each step
I felt warmer,
with each step
I could begin to see clearer,
with each step
I felt my heart beating faster,
with each step
I melted,
until I was a puddle
on the floor
at your feet,
you bent down,
used your shirt
to soak me up,
and then drank me down,
I felt all your warmth
as I twisted and turned
throughout you,
I felt all your love
as I washed through
your bloodstream,
I felt myself seeing,
really seeing things,
I saw the world
through your eyes,
and it was beautiful!!

Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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beautiful BE!
Since I'm in the snow right now
I'd like to be that snowflake
that melted at your feet
and was swallowed
into your body
and you could see
thru my eyesCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
Holey Ghost wrote:beautiful BE!
Since I'm in the snow right now
I'd like to be that snowflake
that melted at your feet
and was swallowed
into your body
and you could see
thru my eyes
My body the flame
that burns your insides
until you lay
in puddles
at mt feet.
I get down
on my knees
and lap you
off the floor,
you
in me,
in you,
forevermore!Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen0 -
Being Enlightened wrote:My body the flame
that burns your insides
until you lay
in puddles
at mt feet.
I get down
on my knees
and lap you
off the floor,
you
in me,
in you,
forevermore!
I trickle into your lips
into your mouth
into your throat
warming your insides
all the way down
I once was a snowflake
now I'm just a puddle of water
nourishing your body
outside then in
all the way downCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
This one is charming like you BE!&&&&&&&&&&&&&&0
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Holey Ghost wrote:I trickle into your lips
into your mouth
into your throat
warming your insides
all the way down
I once was a snowflake
now I'm just a puddle of water
nourishing your body
outside then in
all the way down
I feel you
running through me,
makes me wanna
sway to the music
that's in my soul,
I close my eyes
as your image
is burned
behind them,
I smile
and run
my hands
over my face
to feel your trace,
my smile's
not only my own,
because inside me
you've grown.Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen0 -
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen0
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Being Enlightened wrote:
I feel you
running through me,
makes me wanna
sway to the music
that's in my soul,
I close my eyes
as your image
is burned
behind them,
I smile
and run
my hands
over my face
to feel your trace,
my smile's
not only my own,
because inside me
you've grown.
I feel your embrace
As I fill up your body
Running thru you
In you
Around you
From lips
To your hips
To your thighs
To your toes
To your face
Your hair
Your neck
Your fingertips
My watery drips
As you look
Thru my eyes
And see Paradise
Create Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
Holey Ghost wrote:I feel your embrace
As I fill up your body
Running thru you
In you
Around you
From lips
To your hips
To your thighs
To your toes
To your face
Your hair
Your neck
Your fingertips
My watery drips
As you look
Thru my eyes
And see Paradise
There's a light,
a light that shines a little brighter now,
now that you're with me, somehow,
quenched and drenched sitting on a bench,
in a park,
after dark,
seeing the lovers
converge, merge, I feel your urge,
as I look through your eyes,
it all looks like Paradise!
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen0 -
Being Enlightened wrote:The day swept me off my feet,
carried me gently
from my altered state
and delivered me
onto a pillow of wind,
drifffffting,
floaaating,
like a snowflake,
riding the ethereal breeze,
I came to a crossroads,
where I had to choose
between the summer’s smile
and winter’s icy stare,
it took me no time to decide
and into the blustering white
I ascended,
higher and higher,
and higher still,
above the snow covered trees,
above the thundering clouds,
above all space and time,
my body sh-sh-shivering, near blue,
and my cold and dry eyes saw
through my frost covered eye lashes,
a shadow approaching,
with each step
I felt warmer,
with each step
I could begin to see clearer,
with each step
I felt my heart beating faster,
with each step
I melted,
until I was a puddle
on the floor
at your feet,
you bent down,
used your shirt
to soak me up,
and then drank me down,
I felt all your warmth
as I twisted and turned
throughout you,
I felt all your love
as I washed through
your bloodstream,
I felt myself seeing,
really seeing things,
I saw the world
through your eyes,
and it was beautiful!!
wonderfullay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
ditto kdpjam, be...
lovely thoughts0 -
Seriously BE, amazing....fucking amazing! Thanks for sharing!!Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
Leaving is for the answering machine.0 -
higher and higher every note ascends
heaven to hear and feel with my friends
home where i fly away fly away again
for me writers block contiunues on like a wild fireset your laughter free
dreamer in my dream
we got the guns
i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out0 -
Thanks all.
Much appreciated!
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen0 -
ohh! BE that's just lovely. I got shivers running down my arms and back!!!
:):):):):)
I'm speechless, just beautiful my darling, beautiful! *hugs*"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."0 -
Being Enlightened wrote:.......
my body sh-sh-shivering, near blue,
and my cold and dry eyes saw
through my frost covered eye lashes,
.......
i can picture this so clearly, with your gorgeous long curled lashes!!!
it's just so you...~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~0 -
*hugs back* eMs!
Danka darlin'!
Oh civvy!! *blushes*Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen0
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