In Your Eyes

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The day swept me off my feet,
carried me gently
from my altered state
and delivered me
onto a pillow of wind,
drifffffting,
floaaating,
like a snowflake,
riding the ethereal breeze,
I came to a crossroads,
where I had to choose
between the summer’s smile
and winter’s icy stare,
it took me no time to decide
and into the blustering white
I ascended,
higher and higher,
and higher still,
above the snow covered trees,
above the thundering clouds,
above all space and time,
my body sh-sh-shivering, near blue,
and my cold and dry eyes saw
through my frost covered eye lashes,
a shadow approaching,
with each step
I felt warmer,
with each step
I could begin to see clearer,
with each step
I felt my heart beating faster,
with each step
I melted,
until I was a puddle
on the floor
at your feet,
you bent down,
used your shirt
to soak me up,
and then drank me down,
I felt all your warmth
as I twisted and turned
throughout you,
I felt all your love
as I washed through
your bloodstream,
I felt myself seeing,
really seeing things,
I saw the world
through your eyes,
and it was beautiful!!

:)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • beautiful BE!

    Since I'm in the snow right now
    I'd like to be that snowflake
    that melted at your feet
    and was swallowed
    into your body
    and you could see
    thru my eyes
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • beautiful BE!

    Since I'm in the snow right now
    I'd like to be that snowflake
    that melted at your feet
    and was swallowed
    into your body
    and you could see
    thru my eyes

    My body the flame
    that burns your insides
    until you lay
    in puddles
    at mt feet.
    I get down
    on my knees
    and lap you
    off the floor,
    you
    in me,
    in you,
    forevermore!


    ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • My body the flame
    that burns your insides
    until you lay
    in puddles
    at mt feet.
    I get down
    on my knees
    and lap you
    off the floor,
    you
    in me,
    in you,
    forevermore!


    ;)

    I trickle into your lips
    into your mouth
    into your throat
    warming your insides
    all the way down

    I once was a snowflake
    now I'm just a puddle of water
    nourishing your body
    outside then in
    all the way down
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    This one is charming like you BE! :)
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  • I trickle into your lips
    into your mouth
    into your throat
    warming your insides
    all the way down

    I once was a snowflake
    now I'm just a puddle of water
    nourishing your body
    outside then in
    all the way down

    I feel you
    running through me,
    makes me wanna
    sway to the music
    that's in my soul,
    I close my eyes
    as your image
    is burned
    behind them,
    I smile
    and run
    my hands
    over my face
    to feel your trace,
    my smile's
    not only my own,
    because inside me
    you've grown.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justam wrote:
    This one is charming like you BE! :)

    *kisses* :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

  • I feel you
    running through me,
    makes me wanna
    sway to the music
    that's in my soul,
    I close my eyes
    as your image
    is burned
    behind them,
    I smile
    and run
    my hands
    over my face
    to feel your trace,
    my smile's
    not only my own,
    because inside me
    you've grown.

    I feel your embrace
    As I fill up your body
    Running thru you
    In you
    Around you
    From lips
    To your hips
    To your thighs
    To your toes

    To your face
    Your hair
    Your neck
    Your fingertips
    My watery drips
    As you look
    Thru my eyes

    And see Paradise
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • I feel your embrace
    As I fill up your body
    Running thru you
    In you
    Around you
    From lips
    To your hips
    To your thighs
    To your toes

    To your face
    Your hair
    Your neck
    Your fingertips
    My watery drips
    As you look
    Thru my eyes

    And see Paradise

    There's a light,
    a light that shines a little brighter now,
    now that you're with me, somehow,
    quenched and drenched sitting on a bench,
    in a park,
    after dark,
    seeing the lovers
    converge, merge, I feel your urge,
    as I look through your eyes,
    it all looks like Paradise!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    The day swept me off my feet,
    carried me gently
    from my altered state
    and delivered me
    onto a pillow of wind,
    drifffffting,
    floaaating,
    like a snowflake,
    riding the ethereal breeze,
    I came to a crossroads,
    where I had to choose
    between the summer’s smile
    and winter’s icy stare,
    it took me no time to decide
    and into the blustering white
    I ascended,
    higher and higher,
    and higher still,
    above the snow covered trees,
    above the thundering clouds,
    above all space and time,
    my body sh-sh-shivering, near blue,
    and my cold and dry eyes saw
    through my frost covered eye lashes,
    a shadow approaching,
    with each step
    I felt warmer,
    with each step
    I could begin to see clearer,
    with each step
    I felt my heart beating faster,
    with each step
    I melted,
    until I was a puddle
    on the floor
    at your feet,
    you bent down,
    used your shirt
    to soak me up,
    and then drank me down,
    I felt all your warmth
    as I twisted and turned
    throughout you,
    I felt all your love
    as I washed through
    your bloodstream,
    I felt myself seeing,
    really seeing things,
    I saw the world
    through your eyes,
    and it was beautiful!!

    :)


    wonderful :)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • ditto kdpjam, be...
    lovely thoughts :)
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Seriously BE, amazing....fucking amazing! Thanks for sharing!!
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    higher and higher every note ascends
    heaven to hear and feel with my friends
    home where i fly away fly away again

    for me writers block contiunues on like a wild fire
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • Thanks all. :) Much appreciated!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    ohh! BE that's just lovely. I got shivers running down my arms and back!!! :):):):):):)

    I'm speechless, just beautiful my darling, beautiful! *hugs*
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • .......
    my body sh-sh-shivering, near blue,
    and my cold and dry eyes saw
    through my frost covered eye lashes,
    .......

    i can picture this so clearly, with your gorgeous long curled lashes!!!
    it's just so you...

    :D
    ~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~
  • *hugs back* eMs! :) Danka darlin'!

    Oh civvy!! *blushes*
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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