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Fog

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The waves
keep crashing in,
lulling,
allowing
souls lost
a chance to
materialize.
A Jesus walk,
tip-toeing,
each crest
another
stepping stone,
to shore,
to home.
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Very nice BE...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Mi like that. Mi think it isa good!
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    that's a metaphoric fog, right?

    i like this. any reference to the sea, the night or the moon gets me every time.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Thank you, twin1!!! Nice to see you out and about. :)

    karma, karma, karma, karma, karma, chameleon! :D Danka darlin'! :)

    catefrances, it's part literal, part metaphor, actually. :) Inspired by the actual fog and turned into a metaphor. :) I have quite a few poems about moon, night and the water floating around in the archives here. I enjoy that kinda stuff too. :) Thank you! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    The waves
    keep crashing in,
    lulling,
    allowing
    souls lost
    a chance to
    materialize.
    A Jesus walk,
    tip-toeing,
    each crest
    another
    stepping stone,
    to shore,
    to home.
    I like the part about Jesus best,BE.
    Now if you could just write a poem about how you feel about abortion,
    I'd be impressed.:D
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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