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Being Enlightened
Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Milk flesh kissed by the moon,
I sit at the water's edge,
lulled by the soft sounds
of the surf.
The breath of night
caresses my skin,
whispers through my hair,
calling, calling, calling...
to me softly,
beckoning me with a smile
and promise,
to slip free the shackles
of where I stand,
to break the surface,
leave the solid world of law,
and become liquid, boundless,
wild and free.

:)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    You must be a talented one
    Must be one of my favorites till now (although there are some REALLY excellent ones on here)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Holey Ghost
    Holey Ghost Posts: 744
    Very sensual, and I will respond to this later, if you don't mind. ;)
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh... it's so nice to get in the water! :)
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I love this one. :)
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    GROUP HUG!!!! :D Thanks guys!

    Additions always welcome, H.G. Swells. ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Holey Ghost
    Holey Ghost Posts: 744

    Your body is superfluous
    It moves with each sensuous kiss
    Reflections of the sun upon your surface
    Refractions of the moon upon your lips
    Casting light and shadows
    From your hair and beaming eyes
    from the color of light in the sky
    Down your flowing back
    and around your glowing hips

    Your body moves in waves
    causing me to me in phaze
    Leaving ripples upon my trembling nerves
    As droplets glisten from your curves
    Suddenly there’s a splash!!!!
    As my solid form enters your embrace
    and my lips yearn for your taste
    And I’m wet now from head to toe
    As my hard body fills the inside
    of your cool aqua body with hot-blooded liquid ;)


    H.G. Swells
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • PRfCTlYUNkPTCLtHs
    PRfCTlYUNkPTCLtHs Posts: 120
    luv it.
    well done.
    No need to be void,.. or save up on life,...
    Got to spend it all,.....

    "Those who dance are called insane by those who don't hear the music." EV

    1-14-95, 9-04-00, 7-01-03, 5-30-06, 10-21-06, 10-22-06, 6-17-08, 6-22-08, 8-16-08 E.V., 6-15-09 E.V., 10-28-09, 5-13-10.
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    most excellent BE
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key

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