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Just Do Me A Favor

phoebephoebe Posts: 25
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Just do me a favor...
Never call her Sweet Girl.

Baby... sweety... darling... all those are fine...
But Sweet Girl... that name should always be mine.

Breaking my heart was some how necessary.
I know that you're happy now...
Got a baby, Got married.

And though I feel like my dreams were stolen,
The days since then have kept on rolling.

We don't talk now, and I miss you like hell.
Will we ever be friends again?
Only time will tell.

I know that you love her.
I know she's your world.
But just do me a favor and never call her Sweet Girl.
The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated.
-Mahatma Gandhi
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  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    a great poem of love
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • PJGirl2004PJGirl2004 Posts: 58
    I KNOW WHAT THAT FEELS LIKE,
    KINDA BEEN IN THE SAME BOAT OVER THE LAST YEAR.
    BUT HOLD ON TO THE HOPE THAT THINGS WILL GET BETTER.
    NICE POEM.
    Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
  • phoebephoebe Posts: 25
    Originally posted by PJGirl2004
    I KNOW WHAT THAT FEELS LIKE,
    KINDA BEEN IN THE SAME BOAT OVER THE LAST YEAR.
    BUT HOLD ON TO THE HOPE THAT THINGS WILL GET BETTER.
    NICE POEM.

    thanks :)

    and yes, it's been the past year for me as well :)

    things have gotten better... surprisingly :)
    The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated.
    -Mahatma Gandhi
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