Some poetry
alluneedisluv5
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Hello everyone...I haven't shared my writing with too many people before but I thought that I'd give it a go tonight.....Any comments would be great:)
8/24/02
Hot water spewing from the faucet
Trickling down the B's
Beaming eyes, breasts, belly of the beast
An abalone was how I thought of my body this morning
A shell broken off to reveal a mushy mess
Minus the muscle and mucus
Add one, not the other
An abalone woman
That's who I want to be!
9/4/03
Lingering hope
Slowly building to a blaze
Are you for real this time?
Suggestive utterances
Of yearning and love
A devoted soul
Perplexing gimmicks
A heart cannot break those chains
Her intellect instructs her
Yet ears close to what her optimism says is rubbish
Perhaps they will open to the truth
When her eyes see him embrace the one that she is not
There now but not forever
12/23/00
Those flat chested girls undressed together at the slumber party
I hid in the bathroom
Two melons bulging from my 9 year chest
And, I bled, oh how I bled
On the playground I stood
Both arms across my chest
Desperately seeking camoulflage
But, they saw, oh how they saw
They looked me up and down
Asked me if I could see my own feet
They told me I could have a baby, like I didn't know
All they wanted was a laugh
My body seemed funnier than "I Love Lucy"
160 pounds by junior high
They shoved my desk, those boys in math
Chuckling at my jiggling flesh
Barely 20 and 30 pounds lighter
They call me beautiful now
As if beauty is all on the outside
If they would have looked beyond my body, maybe they'd have seen that I was beautiful all along
Barely 20 and I feel 60
Inner scars to last a lifetime
Stretch marks and sagging breasts
Will I be beautiful when I shed my clothes?
Or will you laugh? Laugh again?
8/24/02
Hot water spewing from the faucet
Trickling down the B's
Beaming eyes, breasts, belly of the beast
An abalone was how I thought of my body this morning
A shell broken off to reveal a mushy mess
Minus the muscle and mucus
Add one, not the other
An abalone woman
That's who I want to be!
9/4/03
Lingering hope
Slowly building to a blaze
Are you for real this time?
Suggestive utterances
Of yearning and love
A devoted soul
Perplexing gimmicks
A heart cannot break those chains
Her intellect instructs her
Yet ears close to what her optimism says is rubbish
Perhaps they will open to the truth
When her eyes see him embrace the one that she is not
There now but not forever
12/23/00
Those flat chested girls undressed together at the slumber party
I hid in the bathroom
Two melons bulging from my 9 year chest
And, I bled, oh how I bled
On the playground I stood
Both arms across my chest
Desperately seeking camoulflage
But, they saw, oh how they saw
They looked me up and down
Asked me if I could see my own feet
They told me I could have a baby, like I didn't know
All they wanted was a laugh
My body seemed funnier than "I Love Lucy"
160 pounds by junior high
They shoved my desk, those boys in math
Chuckling at my jiggling flesh
Barely 20 and 30 pounds lighter
They call me beautiful now
As if beauty is all on the outside
If they would have looked beyond my body, maybe they'd have seen that I was beautiful all along
Barely 20 and I feel 60
Inner scars to last a lifetime
Stretch marks and sagging breasts
Will I be beautiful when I shed my clothes?
Or will you laugh? Laugh again?
"There's just one thing that I still believe and it's love..."
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really great all the same. i'd really be interested in reading more if you were inclined to share.
thanks for posting these.
take care
as if the lights would be on anyway
so many people
so afraid
they might see truth in your face
or rather that you'll see the truth in theirs
the health food store's flashing promises
perfection to fourteen
these marks in my skin...
help me make them go away...
"it's called a diet" barbie sneers
and turns to dip a spoon in yet another powder
promising perfection
perfection
perfection
everyone's goal
get all the pieces
into all the holes
the buzzer pops
thumpers skip beats
terrified i've failed...
yet again...
and i have
duh...
i am not cubic zirconia
(thank you for all these allluv5....)
interesting allluv5
like a snail... no?
zee mental muscles flex to impress me (: