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My attempt at a goth-rock song

fanch75fanch75 Posts: 3,734
edited June 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Blood pours red from the sky
Death from aboooooooooooooooove!
The Couldron of Death rises
from the fire down below
as I raise my sword to slay the dragooooooooooon!
Skulls covered in blood
Shed their final tears

Chorus:
Fire!
Drink from the goblet of the martyrs!
Death!
The velvet hands sof Darkness envelope you!

Meet the hobbit in the dark cave
As he tells you of the Writ from the far away laaaaaaaaaaaands!
Build the wooden sword
and you shall slay the dragon!
As the sky rips open and the the face of eviiiiiiiil
looks upon youuuuuuuuuuuuu!

Chorus:
Fire!
Drink from the goblet of the martyrs!
Death!
The velvet hands sof Darkness envelope you!
Evil!
Death becomes you, you slay the oooooooooorcs!
Martyr!
Die! and let the damned drink your forsaken blood
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Comments

  • MoonlightingMoonlighting England Posts: 136
    I'm seeing Marilyn Manson:D

    Seriously Parchy that was a great song!
    Where did you learn to write like that?

    *Two thumbs up*
    Absolute Equality.No more.No less - AHFA
  • fanch75fanch75 Posts: 3,734
    Originally posted by Moonlighting
    I'm seeing Marilyn Manson:D

    Seriously Parchy that was a great song!
    Where did you learn to write like that?

    *Two thumbs up*

    I laughed my ass of while I was writing that....lol
    Do you remember Rock & Roll Radio?
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    I'm saying more slayer than manson
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by nailz100
    I'm saying more slayer than manson

    And more Spinal Tap than both of them!


    Raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawkkkk!!!!!!!:D:D:D
  • windedsailorwindedsailor Posts: 98
    thanks fanch.

    i needed that.
  • fanch75fanch75 Posts: 3,734
    Originally posted by windedsailor
    thanks fanch.

    i needed that.

    Be sure you do the "operatic vocals" thing in your head while you read it
    Do you remember Rock & Roll Radio?
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    You know, back in about 1991 my mate Seb here in Cambridge had a death metal band. They even made a demo called "And Then He Showed Me the Taste of My Murdered Head" (!), and played the Cambridge Band Competition. And this is the best bit ... they were called ...

    .. Creed ...
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    Gonna send you back to bitch School!

    or who could forget Sex Farm Woman?

    Plowing through your bean field!
    ...pokin your hay
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    lol--great lyrics
  • libragirllibragirl Posts: 4,632
    whoa, yes that is a good goth song, very dark indeed.
    These cuts are leaving creases. Trace the scars to fit the pieces, to tell the story, you don't need to say a word.
  • fanch75fanch75 Posts: 3,734
    Originally posted by libragirl
    whoa, yes that is a good goth song, very dark indeed.

    I left out references to vampires, though. Gotta have those in a goth song.
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  • sultryeveningsultryevening Posts: 522
    im seeing Man O war and now they wont go away!!!
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
    Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
    E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
  • votegirlvotegirl Posts: 95
    :D Perfect.


    I'm going to go, uh, carve the word 'death' into my leg right now.
    I burst, out
    I'm transformed!
  • AsPrivilegedAsAWhoreAsPrivilegedAsAWhore Posts: 109
    *sews up side*... man that was good...
    hah jesus...


    nicley done;)...

    though i think you could have worked the hobit bit more... ya know... just for irritation's sake;)

    oi... man im a loser...
    They filled me full of drink
    And led me round the rooms
    Naked and cold and grinning
    Until everything went black
    And I came down spinning
    I awoke so drunk and full of rage
    That I could hardly speak
    A fag in a whale bone corset
    Draping his dick across my cheek
    And its into the shame
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Once in a while, ya gotta bump this thread up...

    The Forrrrrce is strooooong in this oooone.

    :D
  • fanch75fanch75 Posts: 3,734
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Once in a while, ya gotta bump this thread up...

    The Forrrrrce is strooooong in this oooone.

    :D

    I sense something...elusive.....elsewhere.......
    Do you remember Rock & Roll Radio?
  • fanch75fanch75 Posts: 3,734
    man, this thread was awesome
    Do you remember Rock & Roll Radio?
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