my experience with love (feedback)
GivenToPimp
Posts: 19
SUNDAY, AUGUST 17, 2003
i walk up to the door & hear your voice
everything settles, i pull the door open
my eyes searching, resting upon your freckled face
i say hello, walk to you, take your hand
time stands still, i sit by you, and gaze
i'm lost in a trance, i look at you
both hands now, lost in a web of fingers
we look again and just smile, no words needed
theres only one thing i want to say to you
i hesitate, fearing release and loss, holding on
finally i whisper it, to your ear, thru your hair
against my lips, soft and soothing,
room goes quiet, we're alone. i say it.
i love you. my heart races waiting for a reaction,
better than i could have hoped for
your head turns, a quick glance, lips come to my ear
i love you too. i hold you tighter
thats all i can think to do, you get comfortable in my arms
my heart gets comfortable with yours
we're now lost in twisted arms wrapped and legs held, you exhale,
the sweetest breeze, i kiss all of you and you hold me
even tighter, so tight i become a part of you. its time to go,
everyone waves goodbye. i stand and hold you
for what feels like forever and a second at the same time.
you say it again and i know it's true
i love you too. thank you.
i walk up to the door & hear your voice
everything settles, i pull the door open
my eyes searching, resting upon your freckled face
i say hello, walk to you, take your hand
time stands still, i sit by you, and gaze
i'm lost in a trance, i look at you
both hands now, lost in a web of fingers
we look again and just smile, no words needed
theres only one thing i want to say to you
i hesitate, fearing release and loss, holding on
finally i whisper it, to your ear, thru your hair
against my lips, soft and soothing,
room goes quiet, we're alone. i say it.
i love you. my heart races waiting for a reaction,
better than i could have hoped for
your head turns, a quick glance, lips come to my ear
i love you too. i hold you tighter
thats all i can think to do, you get comfortable in my arms
my heart gets comfortable with yours
we're now lost in twisted arms wrapped and legs held, you exhale,
the sweetest breeze, i kiss all of you and you hold me
even tighter, so tight i become a part of you. its time to go,
everyone waves goodbye. i stand and hold you
for what feels like forever and a second at the same time.
you say it again and i know it's true
i love you too. thank you.
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Indulge me a moment while I sit by your side.
Without a glimps of your face, my heart cannot rest,
and my work becomes drudgery in an endless sea of toil.
Today summer came to my window, sighing and
murmuring, and the bees played like minstrels at the
court of flowery groves.
Now we'll sit quietly, each to each,
and sing out our dedication to life
in silent and ever-flowing ease.
RT
All Is Still
All at once the sight of you!
Your gaze, full of light
Makes everything still-
Everything still
The milk spills on the ground
My parents and brothers cry Stop!
"Pluck him from your heart," they say.
"Or your way is lost."
Mira says, "Who of you but him
Can really see into the dark well of my heart?"
M.
Blossoming
Sunlight spreads over a face in the shadows
Like the flower of truth beginning to unfold
R.
like my eyes could be seen through to the mind and the waves
can be read
makes me feel like a young boy
may god bless your beautiful soul
I would frame this poem and hang it close to your heart.
PS I love you too:)Best said by one who you share that intimacy with though.
Have a good one....
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?