personal war

ladygooddiva

looking the mirrow who do you see
is this real what you see
what we gonna be
closed eyes what we see

grungy,pretty,sexy,real
is this real what you see
who do you wanna be
break the mirrow inbetween you


showing the real is it real
acting like is this the truth
who are you
be what you are
but who are you


wanna be what
everyday something new
expressing.. beeing somebody.. something
beeing two in one
every day somehow new


unhappy
happy
depressed
lost
loved
unloved
real
unreal
sweet
thinn
fat
blond
black
white

just you....

ladygooddiva

maybe this is too confussed and not well written :(:(????

ladygooddiva

codedbrandedlabelled wrote:

no it's really well written

some good stuff always gets left unreplied to

for me your stuff takes time to sink in and the words butt up against each other sometimes its a challenge to read, but that doesn't mean it's not good

ok thanx
i´m not often here so i tried out something new to me...
that´s my style i think...

Ana Claudia

I like too, and to me is easy to understand, I don't think is bad written.

ladygooddiva

Ana Claudia wrote:

I like too, and to me is easy to understand, I don't think is bad written.[/QUOT

ok thanx for the rewiev!!!