dreamin

ladygooddiva
ladygooddiva Posts: 4,169
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
to touch you ones
or twice
to feel
or
to smell you

or would you touch me
once or twice

like a hurricane
we may enjoy each other
for one night
or two

but you wouldn´t rember my name
and throw me out

is that word to go for

yes


or no

nobody knows

bec.
it´s dreamin
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    "but you wouldn´t rember my name
    and throw me out"

    Awwww, now that doesn't sound like a nice dream!!!! :( If he doesn't remember your name or throws you out, he definately ain't worth another breath! :)

    This poem actually remined me of that song "Stay With Me" by Rod StEWart (that guy just rubs me the wrong way for some reason)

    "So in the morning
    Please don't say you love me
    Cause you know I'll only kick you out the door

    Yea I'll pay your cab fare home
    You can even use my best colonge
    Just don't be here in the morning when I wake up" - ASS! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ladygooddiva
    ladygooddiva Posts: 4,169
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    "but you wouldn´t rember my name
    and throw me out"

    Awwww, now that doesn't sound like a nice dream!!!! :( If he doesn't remember your name or throws you out, he definately ain't worth another breath! :)

    This poem actually remined me of that song "Stay With Me" by Rod StEWart (that guy just rubs me the wrong way for some reason)

    "So in the morning
    Please don't say you love me
    Cause you know I'll only kick you out the door

    Yea I'll pay your cab fare home
    You can even use my best colonge
    Just don't be here in the morning when I wake up" - ASS! :D


    no truth inside couse it´s dreamin
    so never know if "he" throw me out and don´t remeber my name
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    ladygooddiva wrote:
    no truth inside couse it´s dreamin
    so never know if "he" throw me out and don´t remeber my name

    :) I know there's no truth in it, it's only a dream but how can we help you have happier dreams???? :)

    I want you to dream of those touches and smells and caresses, and I want you to dream of him calling your name out, and always having a place for you, an open door, and for the storm never to cease, just a whirlwind of love and passion and happiness and ecstacy... :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ladygooddiva
    ladygooddiva Posts: 4,169
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :) I know there's no truth in it, it's only a dream but how can we help you have happier dreams???? :)

    I want you to dream of those touches and smells and caresses, and I want you to dream of him calling your name out, and always having a place for you, an open door, and for the storm never to cease, just a whirlwind of love and passion and happiness and ecstacy... :)


    and when i scream his name in my dreamin my bf will ....me:D

    i don´t know how help can be but thanx anyways ...

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