hold on

GouletGoulet Posts: 918
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i think there's something
in my brain
itching to get out
feels like a finger
or an ant

coleen write a poem right now
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    :) i've never written on demand before......
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    see how hard it is
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    lesson learned oh wise one.

    i promise to never insist on poetry again.
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by coleen
    lesson learned oh wise one.

    i promise to never insist on poetry again.

    i don't think i meant that,
    i think i meant that i drank too much coffee this morning
    and got too much sleep last night
    and now my fingers can't stop moving
    and i need something to read
    that is thoughtful
    and serious
    and full of whimsy
    all at the same time.

    and always insist poetry or else poetry will
    die alone in teh corner of its bedroom
    whimpering about how its so alone
    and so depressed
    but really poetry is tall
    and handsome
    and full of sensual energy
    and sexual energy
    and poetry is only
    "screwed-up lovely 23"
    for one more day.
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    and you see i went off on my own to try to write you a five minute poem and how could i ever consider posting next to this little lovely. ;)
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by coleen
    and you see i went off on my own to try to write you a five minute poem and how could i ever consider posting next to this little lovely. ;)

    i didn't mean that to be a poem,
    i just wrote it in lines
    and so it looks
    like one
    tah-dah!
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Goulet
    i didn't mean that to be a poem,
    i just wrote it in lines
    and so it looks
    like one
    tah-dah!

    you are a clever one aren't you. :P
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by coleen
    you are a clever one aren't you. :P

    clever
    cleaver
    leave it up to beaver
    and i mean that with all of my heart
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Goulet
    clever
    cleaver
    leave it up to beaver
    and i mean that with all of my heart

    smiling at the seuss-ical quality of that one.
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